It's...pretty well for a first. You may want to work on not making all the legs on one side. Also, the tail an ears need a little work. Other than those two minor errors, it's pretty good. -Bird
This is really good for your first oekaki! If you don't mind a bit of critique, I'd suggest you may want to fix the legs a little. Make them look like they're not all on one side.
I think it's cute. ^^ My first drawing wasn't perfect either, so don't worry about yours. With time everyone eventually gets it. :'3 Check it out; viewtopic.php?t=651936 <-- I don't take critique personally guys, so please comment on it if you have any ideas on how to make it better! ^^