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Tobi by ~Loki~

Artist ~Loki~ [gallery]
Time spent 5 hours, 46 minutes
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Tobi

Postby ~Loki~ » Mon May 02, 2011 10:22 am

This is Tobi for Wolves_rock for my art shop. And, surprise! I'm giving you a free background! Yes, I'll do that occasionaly. ;) Hope you like it!

SEEKING EXPERIANCED ARTIST'S CRITISIM AND TIPS PLEASE!! :D As this is my first atempt ever at drawing snow, I'de like a little guidance.
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Re: WIP - Tobi

Postby ~Loki~ » Mon May 02, 2011 4:00 pm

Any comments?
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Re: WIP - Tobi

Postby geinkotsu » Mon May 02, 2011 4:54 pm

On wolf critisism, make sure the ears are not too long, and that the top edges are rounded. I think that the skull may be a little too small on this one. The eye looks great, but beware, the edge near to the nose is not pointed, but rounded instead.

As for the snow, it depends if it is freshly fallen or not. Fresh fallen is usually quite smooth. If it sits over a day or so, it tends to seem a little gratey and not very smooth. Also, if he is pushing through the snow, have it build up in front of his legs and have a sort of path behind him. Just like a snow plow would do to a street. If he is trying to walk over it, have leg holes in the snow.
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Re: WIP - Tobi

Postby i-m-snek » Wed May 04, 2011 7:37 am

Oooh he looks good so far!! I like it :D
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Re: WIP - Tobi

Postby i-m-snek » Thu May 05, 2011 2:01 pm

Also, just letting you know that Tobi is the orange one ^^ I think you switched up the characters I have on accident :)
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Re: WIP - Tobi

Postby ~Loki~ » Thu May 05, 2011 4:21 pm

Wolves_rock wrote:Also, just letting you know that Tobi is the orange one ^^ I think you switched up the characters I have on accident :)


no, I know he is the orange one. I was just doing some experiments on fur, and didn't change it back to the orange it was before. ^^
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Re: WIP - Tobi

Postby i-m-snek » Thu May 12, 2011 10:06 am

~Featherwolf~ wrote:
Wolves_rock wrote:Also, just letting you know that Tobi is the orange one ^^ I think you switched up the characters I have on accident :)


no, I know he is the orange one. I was just doing some experiments on fur, and didn't change it back to the orange it was before. ^^

Ooooh okay ^^ I was just making sure :D
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Re: Tobi

Postby Magicmia4001 » Wed May 18, 2011 1:52 pm

i think that the head's a little too small.But other than that i think its great.
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Re: Tobi

Postby ~Loki~ » Thu May 19, 2011 4:43 pm

Yep I realize it's too small... But it would be hard to fix, I'm glad you like it though! :)
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