[harlical]

A blizzard roared outside the cave that you had sought shelter in. Darkness enveloped your whole body. only the small flicker of the fire you had somehow managed to spark provided light, but most importantly heat. Suddenly you hear the pattering of light pawsteps behind you. you could see nothing in the heavy, overwhelming dark. eyes flashed in the dark. the fear inside you rises. what could be back there? Is it dangerous? you don't know the answers to those crucial questions. then, a small blue wolf padded out to meet you. no emotion showed in her eyes. her eyes held much wisdom and power. she spoke up, "You seek light and warmth," she said in a honey-smooth voice, "I can give you both. but do you deserve them?" You sit in complete awe. "Do you?" she said in a comanding voice. "Y-Yes. I think I do." you say. crystal blue eyes glared at you. "No, you do not. remember how you did not heed older ones advice, and came here? how your ignorance brought you to this treacherous mountain, and brought you into my home uninvited?" Her voice elevated to a greater volume. "For this I shall give you death!" She roared. Power radiated off her velvet-soft fur. She grew 10 times her size, and her fur became black, and her eyes red. her paw flew towards you. claws slice through your throught and you feel life ebbing away. you fall into a forever slumber.

Random story I made for this wolf for a competition. Well, hope you like it! PS her name is Stärke, which in German means strength.

[FluffyTheUnicorn]

0-10
Eyes: 5
Face Design: 3
Theme: 5 (i don't see the dark theme in her design)
Name: 5

0-5
Tail Design: 2
Accessories: 0

0-3
Ear design: 2

Extra Points: 1(for the story)

Total: 23

and as i can see you did not do the paws, color pads and the other tail thing.