[Ruki Ki]

Finally finished it. Sorry. The first panel is good, but after that, I think it all just goes down hill. I don't do bird very much if at all, so tell me what you think. ALSO: Would you guys rather have more frequent updates that have less detail and shtuff OR would you rather have less frequent with more detail and such. Less frequent: 3 More frequent: 2

Dialogue:
Cyri: Hello friend. Are you here to leads me to food?
Raven: CAW!
Cyri: I take that as a yes. *sniff*


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Story and Characters copyright Wolf-Chan
Art and Illustrations copyright Ruki Ki

[Meredith's Whiskers]

FIRST REPLY!Awesome!it's sooooo cute!Ur amazing!I fine with waiting to get more details^^

[Shiko Hayashi]

I personally am fine with however.
Love the second raven panel. The detail is amazing.

She looks cute in the very last panel.

[Wep'keer]

Yay! New page. ^.^

[dragons.inc.]

love the raven and the third panel! your art is really amazing (:

[Rohan.]

more frequent with a bit less detail ^^ Amazing art! ima comic stalker ^^

[juni.purrs]

More frquequent with less detail if you have the time, hon, otherwise it doesn't matter to me. :) I absolutely love your drawing ability, Ruki Ki, and your writing ability, Wolf-Chan. :'3

Oh, and Ruki Ki, your bird is simply amazing and so it the rest of your work. ^^ Don't worry about little mistakes because it isn't likely that anyone else will notice unless you tell them. xD ... Or, like, if they go over art pixel by pixel... But I don't think there are those type of critiques here on CS, haha, no worries. ^^;

[No longer member]

Finally finished it. Sorry. The first panel is good, but after that, I think it all just goes down hill. I don't do bird very much if at all, so tell me what you think. ALSO: Would you guys rather have more frequent updates that have less detail and shtuff OR would you rather have less frequent with more detail and such. Yes: 0 No: 0

Dialogue:
Cyri: Hello friend. Are you here to leads me to food?
Raven: CAW!
Cyri: I take that as a yes. *sniff*


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Story and Characters copyright Wolf-Chan
Art and Illustrations copyright Ruki Ki

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[WhoLocked]

Oooo. PRETTY!

[-Obsidian]

awesome. Ithink with lots of detail, because with the wait inbetween, it builds up tension.