[banooky]

Dotstar was teased when she was Dotpaw, when she heard she was going to be leader,she was surprised and happy. But they told her she had to fight. When she heard that, she went to the leader of the bullies who teased her, Bullet. She let her claws out and gave him scars. After 20 seconds of battle, Bullet was on the ground. "I'm sorry. Dotstar-" He stopped as she opened her mouth to speak. "You are a barn cat! You should be sorry or your scars will become your graveyard because if you do not stop I'll kill you!" "We... can have a life if we just have 5 kits?" Bullet asked tilting his head like a confused dog. "If I do, I'm taking one with me to the clans, and just ONE!" Dotstar walked back home in a 'if' mood.

[ScarTheLion]

cute, good job