[Celozon]

Kako looked up at the sound of running feet and skidded to a stop in front of a white and blue dragon coming from the opposite direction. What does he think he is doing here? The other dragon also seemed surprised and a little frightened. He's not from the compound, that's all I know. thought Kako as a cloud of dirt billowed up from the ground where their feet skidded, ripping up the grass but it's root.

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Wow. I did really bad on this one. I didn't even try on the big panel. I had ro re-draw it so may times I got frustrated and just stayed with what I had that look ok. >.<

And I have now added a story to go with my comic and it even tells you more, to help you understand, and to give you hints. I love hints.

Kako(rust-colored dragon) belongs to me
Jarshoc(white dragon) belongs to jellyfish
Story and art belong to me

If you would like one of your characters in this comic you can, just go here.

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Sorry, my comic is going temporarily on hold. I'm turning 18 June 20th so I will be moving away and I won't be able to work on this at all. I plan on adding a little story thing for every page, but I won't be getting any more pages up anytime soon. Anyone who paid to have their characters in here, don't worry, I will finish this and if I don't I'll send you back your payment. I will not have internet right away after moving in so please be patient. I will try to let you all know if anything happens and I will try to get back to this comic as soon as I can.
My comic is no longer on hold, I am now continuing to draw it and hopefully it will not need to go on hold anymore. ^.^

[Siriro]

cool!xD love this comic!xD

[SnowBall The Wolf]

awesome, cant wait until my wolf comes in!

[Celozon]

@Mulle2010: Thanks! I'm still loving the stuff in your avatar

@Arctic*Wolf*Luva: I'm trying to get everyone's in soon, it takes longer than you'd think to get to new characters.

Heh. That last one still looks terrible. They look like little kids. My sister thinks Kako's (the red-brown dragon) expression is funny, but thats about it.

[Celozon]

eh. I just remembered I forgot to add the dust clouds from them stopping. Then I couldn't get on the computer that day. Fixed it now though. It helps cover up the terribleness of that panel.

[jellyfish]

Happy birthday!!

[Celozon]

Thanks! ^.^

[jellyfish]

i like the little writing parts

[Celozon]

i like the little writing parts

Someone read them! They are very informative aren't they? Actually every time I read something like that that I wrote it looks wrong and I have to fix it. Thats why I never finish any of my stories. >.> I figured I would just write these and not look at them so I don't see the mistakes.

[jellyfish]

i hate re-reading things i write because i always feel like i need to re-write them, but i never want to.