[Scabs297]

The day was bright and welcoming. There was a small and cool breeze coming in through the north, so I knew the wind would pick up. It always becomes stronger when it's coming in through the north. I've never been to the river near those mountains. I hear there is a secret passage to the New Realm, but I don't know. My mother is there. I know it. But first, I must find my sister and my father to accomplish my quest. I'll find the New Realm and my mother. I'll do what ever it takes because I'm part of the New Generation and I won't let the flame burn out before it is even lit.
So I hide under the brush where the leaves lie low and cover my body, securing my safety. Yes the sun shines, but the wind bites and so does the shadows. That I must stay away from. The shadows. The war isn't over and the shadows were under my mother's control, but now that she's gone, they might turn against us and my security will become weak. My mother was once taken by a shadow, but that was a long time ago. In the times before those people from the Ice Realm appeared and stressed her out even more...
I made a new charrie! His name's Alaric and he is Scott's and Misty's son. His only sister is Aqua of course and he is one of the very few warriors who has a natural pelt without markings. Please tell me what you think

[Eiloh]

this is amazing!! i love it!

[Scabs297]

thanks, but i don't think its that great