Sorry for the wait! Please remove long tail from the edits list (curled tails never have a tail length edit listed), and add eyelashes and ear tufts (both common) ^^
This coat will need some slight adjustments before this cat can be approved. If you'd like to keep the current coat description, the base coat will need to be much paler along the chin/muzzle, eyes, stomach, neck, inside of the legs, stomach, and base of the tail (the areas lighter on cats like
this). The stripes should also fade to a paler color in these lighter areas.
Here is an example of an irl agouti carnelian, and
here is a Stars cat. If you choose to make these edits, please also add "agouti" to the start of the coat description!
Alternately, if you'd like to keep the appearance more similar to how it currently is, you have two options:
1. You can adjust the lighter color of the base coat to be more localized/gradiented to just the lower areas of the cat (without the corresponding extreme lightness and stripe lightening necessary for carnelian) like
this and update the coat description to red rather than carnelian.
2. You could instead change the lighter "filling" of the stripes to a color in between the base coat and stripes (e.g. around #D66839, which would look like
this) like
this cat (keep in mind that this new darker color should only appear
Sorry to offer a lot of options, but I wanted to be sure to include whatever would make you happiest with your cat's design 😅 If you need any additional clarification, please lmk! Otherwise, please let me know when this cat's been updated, and I'll be back to approve them asap ^^