Hello!
Unfortunately the MYO you've linked is a UC MYO -- which means it has 1 uncommon edit and unlimited below. You'll need a different MYO ticket or an additional UC edit item to cover the edits this cat has (or you could edit the cat to have only 1 UC edit instead)
Loki is correct, the inner color of the stripes on the red patch on the shoulder will need to be edited to a color that is darker than the base coat but lighter than the outside of the stripes
Additionally, this tail would be considered a bob tail, not a common shorter tail (you can find the tail length reference image linked in our edits list on the main page). You'll need to either change the MYO ticket used, apply a rare edit item for this, or edit the tail
Please let me know when that's all be addressed and I'll be back to check this cat again asap!