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CRITICISM by Sugar Teeth

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CRITICISM

Postby Sugar Teeth » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:11 pm

gimmie it dont be to harsh ill honestly stop drawing on oekaki : )
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Postby Moonligh50 » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:13 pm

Its Okay, but you can improve by adding color, shading, etc. And I mean NO offense, but it looks just a little childish. Try practicing on paper.
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Postby roblox » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:15 pm

i actually really really like it! i was going to say anatomy but you've got that down as much as you can while keeping it cartoony! The eyes may be a little too small but its not really an issue, it might also be a little stiff, try making it more lively by practicing with different poses!
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Postby Foxil » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:30 pm

Not really criticism, but I'd recommend watching Lavendertowne! (if you haven't in the past ^^) She's an art youtuber and has some super helpful tutorials
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Postby Sugar Teeth » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:46 pm

Image he boogie and gimmie more criticism
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Postby arsonbird » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:47 pm

i feel your designs are all very similar, maybe try a horror aesthetic or smth? also, varitaion in bodies / genders!
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Postby Sugar Teeth » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:53 pm

Image dont be shy i wanna know what u think abt my art (my art in general not just that drawing looool)
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Postby Starry Night » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:56 pm

I think your line work is really good
Having steady lines in digital is hard

I would recommend working on posture?
idk how to put it but all your drawings lean one way or the other in a lopsided way

but otherwise, very nice art esp. your feral designs! keep at it!
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Postby demi-fiend » Sat Dec 04, 2021 4:59 pm

It's very cute! Using the oekaki is very hard, so it's difficult to get straight and steady lines, but maybe that's the first go. It isn't visible, but are you using guidelines and building skeleton shapes to make your bodies? If not, I recommend looking at a bunch of references and trying to break those forms into basic shapes- cubes, circles, and cylinders. You have a lot going for you already, and I hope to see you improve!
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Postby Sugar Teeth » Sat Dec 04, 2021 5:03 pm

Image mooore
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