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Kitty by Captain Jack

Artist Captain Jack [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 44 minutes
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Kitty

Postby Captain Jack » Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:31 am

I don't have a cat, so cat owners please tell me if I missed anything.
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Re: Kitty

Postby ~Kaleidoscope~ » Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:41 am

This is very nice. I love the fur texture. The only thing I have to critique is the eyes. The eyes stand out a bit much, they're not very catlike, and they are very large and don't seem to fit in with the drawing. But otherwise, great job!
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Re: Kitty

Postby Captain Jack » Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:46 am

Lynx7 wrote:This is very nice. I love the fur texture. The only thing I have to critique is the eyes. The eyes stand out a bit much, they're not very catlike, and they are very large and don't seem to fit in with the drawing. But otherwise, great job!

Yes, I know the eyes are a little large, I did them first and didn't want to erase them...
I kind of do the same kind of eye for all animals, so...
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Re: Kitty

Postby SmoothieKing » Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:00 pm

The face is a little long and the eyes are funny shaped,but this is a really good drawing!
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Re: Kitty

Postby Wolfmoon99 » Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:14 pm

Cute :D
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Re: Kitty

Postby Oxycaine » Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:09 pm

-smaller eyes
-the eyes are too close to eachother
-white whiskers with black whiskers
-the left ear looks taller than the right
-cats have a couple whiskers by the eyes and ears
the face is too long


But you did pretty good for not having a cat.
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Re: Kitty

Postby Featherhandcuffs » Mon Oct 17, 2011 2:37 am

I think the body is good, along with the fire texture, but those eyes. They are too far apart and far too big.
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Re: Kitty

Postby Captain Jack » Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:15 am

... Well, I drew this two years ago, but thanks for the input anyway. xD
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