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The young fox collapsed into the shrubby grass and lay there. It was high noon and she was bleeding badly.She slept for hours and awoke to sunset, And a Large Male Tiro. "What is a young female doing out here in the cold?" He asked in his smooth and silky voice. "Please help me! I'm hurt and my legs broken."She replied and added, "My names Lyte whats Yours?" He smiled broadly and said in a kinder tone "I'm Lyon the Leader of Neonpack. Shall i carry you?" She smiled and winced as he lifted her onto his back, and ran to the pack.

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[AlliBunny]

May i give some helpful crit if i may? ^^
You could try making the muzzles a little smaller and making the head and muzzle less kind of connected? (Sorry i idn't explain that very well. >.<)

But overall it think it is very cute.<3 XD
Love the sunrise background. =3

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I prob wont change it i like it the way it is!
Thats how i draw and personily i dont think i want to change!

thankyou but no thanks