1- Light Brown Tabby - This cat is lively and likes to hunt for mice. He/She is a loyal warrior an would do anything for his/her clan. [adopted by •~Axis~•]
2- Pale Calico - This cat is very laidback and calm. He/She is very good at training apprentices because of his/her patience. [Adopted by shebapearl]
3- Dark Grey Tabby - This cat is quiet. He/She doesn't say much but is very skilled at fighting. Often He/she leaves battle with only a few scratches. Although he/she isn't very good with kittens because of his/her lack of patience. [Adopted by Aysan1]
4- Calico/Tabby Mix - This cat is very playful but elegant. He/She is very good with kits and helping out around camp. His/Her fighting skills are average while his/her hunting skills are alittle above average. [Adopted by Sophiemarie197]
5- Abyssinian-like Cat - This cat is very wise. Although currently just a warrior, it has been rumored that he/she is in the running to be the next deputy. [Adopted by Scamps]
6- Tan, Brown, and White Cat - The cat is young and slightly clumsy. He/She often thinks before he/she acts, but since He/she only an apprentice he/she is probably going to grow out of it. [Adopted by HDC]
Compliments:
HDC: Your story had a very good hook, I couldn't stop reading. I wanted to hear so much more at the end! It makes me wonder, What's going to happen next? Good job! I hope to see you applying at In New Paws!
Emeraldarrow: I liked your description as well as your names. Plus I liked the logical personality you gave Darkfire, he's the kind of cat to think things through (;.
•~Axis~•: VERY intriguing! It presented a conflict, and made me want to read more. I hope to hear more of this story!
Shadow88000: I liked the story, it presented a nice conflict. Although I wish you would of expanded a little more ^^.
shebapearl: I Love the name! Plus after I read this I wanted to hear more. I can't read to read more!
Ruffdog: Leo, I love the name to bits! Plus I love the empowering feeling you get from reading about Leo. Good Job!
•~Axis~•: You always come up with such good stories! Although, I could only pick you for one cat. Even though I liked this story, I loved the other one even more!
Aysan1: I liked being able to read from Tiberpaw's point of view. It gave a whole new aspect of the story. I hope to hear more about Timberpaw and Lemoncinder! (;
Sophiemarie197: You were the only one who wrote in poem form. I absolutely adored that! I wish more peoples' entries were that way! Good Job ^^
hawkpaw44: I liked the story very much. I liked the description and it was very well written, Good job (:.
Scamps: Oh scamps, I couldn't love it more! Being a Warriors fan, I always loved a good cross clan relationship. It presented a very nice conflict, I luffled it ^^.
Thank you everyone for entering, I hope to see you all apply for cats in the adoption agency in my signature!
2- Pale Calico - This cat is very laidback and calm. He/She is very good at training apprentices because of his/her patience. [Adopted by shebapearl]
3- Dark Grey Tabby - This cat is quiet. He/She doesn't say much but is very skilled at fighting. Often He/she leaves battle with only a few scratches. Although he/she isn't very good with kittens because of his/her lack of patience. [Adopted by Aysan1]
4- Calico/Tabby Mix - This cat is very playful but elegant. He/She is very good with kits and helping out around camp. His/Her fighting skills are average while his/her hunting skills are alittle above average. [Adopted by Sophiemarie197]
5- Abyssinian-like Cat - This cat is very wise. Although currently just a warrior, it has been rumored that he/she is in the running to be the next deputy. [Adopted by Scamps]
6- Tan, Brown, and White Cat - The cat is young and slightly clumsy. He/She often thinks before he/she acts, but since He/she only an apprentice he/she is probably going to grow out of it. [Adopted by HDC]
Compliments:
HDC: Your story had a very good hook, I couldn't stop reading. I wanted to hear so much more at the end! It makes me wonder, What's going to happen next? Good job! I hope to see you applying at In New Paws!
Emeraldarrow: I liked your description as well as your names. Plus I liked the logical personality you gave Darkfire, he's the kind of cat to think things through (;.
•~Axis~•: VERY intriguing! It presented a conflict, and made me want to read more. I hope to hear more of this story!
Shadow88000: I liked the story, it presented a nice conflict. Although I wish you would of expanded a little more ^^.
shebapearl: I Love the name! Plus after I read this I wanted to hear more. I can't read to read more!
Ruffdog: Leo, I love the name to bits! Plus I love the empowering feeling you get from reading about Leo. Good Job!
•~Axis~•: You always come up with such good stories! Although, I could only pick you for one cat. Even though I liked this story, I loved the other one even more!
Aysan1: I liked being able to read from Tiberpaw's point of view. It gave a whole new aspect of the story. I hope to hear more about Timberpaw and Lemoncinder! (;
Sophiemarie197: You were the only one who wrote in poem form. I absolutely adored that! I wish more peoples' entries were that way! Good Job ^^
hawkpaw44: I liked the story very much. I liked the description and it was very well written, Good job (:.
Scamps: Oh scamps, I couldn't love it more! Being a Warriors fan, I always loved a good cross clan relationship. It presented a very nice conflict, I luffled it ^^.
Thank you everyone for entering, I hope to see you all apply for cats in the adoption agency in my signature!
