Rise | #2522 by liightning

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Rise | #2522

Postby liightning » Wed Nov 13, 2019 12:33 pm

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!


To enter, you must own a founder and be at least level 1, or have no founder in progress or at all.


cursed cat that you can thank Neah for :3

Thanksgiving is approaching! What is this cat most grateful for?
Challenge - instead of answering directly, show me in a story or scene!

No word limit, but please break up chunks of writing <3
You also have two extras of your choice - they can be art or something else!


End date: November 24th, 11:59 pm EST

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This cat may not be traded until February 25th, 2020. There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.

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Father: Foundation
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    username: kamelgirl
    cat name: Scorchpaw (Scorchflight)
    clan: RimeClan
    rank: apprentice

    gender: female
    age: 19 moons
    description: pale tortie point with a white chin, chest, tail tip,
    and toes
    genetic description: silver shaded blue-cream tortie mink point
    with minimal white and blue eyes

    other features: none
    siblings: none living
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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby .sins. » Wed Nov 13, 2019 12:57 pm

username: .sins.
cat name: Palespots
gender: (dfab) Female
age: 50 moons
clan: Strawberryclan
rank: Defender

prompt: grateful for story.
extras: (optional, 2 max) moodboard?//playlist?
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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby Phönixfeder2000 » Wed Nov 13, 2019 5:23 pm

username: Phönixfeder2000
cat name: Marble (Marblecry later)
gender: (dfab)
age: 9 Moons
clan: BirchClan (adding link later)
rank: Kittypet (Apprentice later)

prompt: When Marble was a stray, she was attacked by a fox near the river and almost got killed. But luckily Tornstar and Frostheart found her while hunting and managed to fight the fox. After that, They took her in the camp and asked if she wants to join the clan. From this moment, Marblepaw (now apprentice of Frostheart) wasn't alone anymore and had a purpose to fight for. She became one of the best fighter in the whole (small) clan. After all those moons passed, she still prays to StarClan and is thankful for being saved by Tornstar and Frostheart.
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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby EchoIre » Fri Nov 15, 2019 2:14 am

username: EchoIre
cat name: Marbles
gender: (dfab)
age: 11 Moons
clan: SunClan
rank: Apprentice

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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby orbiting » Mon Nov 25, 2019 9:50 am

username: orbiting
cat name: willowflight
gender: female
age: 48 moons
clan: orbitclan
rank: warrior

prompt:

the seasons may change, as will your life
things will come and go like the wind,
and as quickly as you love things, they may melt away from you like snow.
but there is always one thing constant in your ever changing destiny:
night will always become day, and the sun will never cease to rise if only to shine on you,
so thank it by taking it's brilliance with you as you go upon the day it's blessed you with.


Willowflight shuddered. Tonight was colder than usual, and it made her paws numb, the path underneath her buzzing with every step she took. Her breath billowed out from her in shallow clouds and rose into the snowy atmosphere, disappearing into an unforgiving winter sky.
She stumbled through the snow, feeling every step drain her of heat.
Her clan had been without sun for the last 2 moonpassings; the sky had turned grey and rained snow for hours upon end, engulfing the cats of her clan in sheets of freezing snow. The sun was there; hidden behind the cold, sheltered by the winter clouds. No cat had ever recalled seeing a winter as bad as this, and it installed in each cat's heart a fear.
In one cat's heart, however, it gave way to something else: determination.
The cat was a young apprentice named Duskpaw. And Duskpaw, before leaving her camp to face the bold, unforgiving winter, had told her fellow apprentices that she was going to speak to Starclan, and beg for them to give back the sun.
It was a valiant effort. But the cave that held the crystal that allowed cats to speak with their ancestors was a long journey; and left to her own devices, it was obvious the young apprentice would not make it.
Willowflight had been the cat chosen to bring her back.
She'd made it halfway when the chills had become too loud to ignore, stabbing at her skin underneath her fur. Her eyes begged her to close them, shielding them from the cold; and every step became a mile, for her legs had nearly froze.
An apprentice, a cat half her size, with half her fur would not have made it this far.
Each breath was fire. Everything in her told her to turn back. Maybe if she turned back now, she would be able to make it back to her camp.
But she'd come too far. Returning now, without the beloved apprentice by her side, would not only rack her clan but leave her broken in grief. She pressed on.
Like a raven in a snowstorm, the black lump of fur stood out against the field of white it laid on. The fur of the collapsed apprentice blew violently in the breeze. Duskpaw's limbs were sprawled out in all directions, eyes shut.
Willowflight bounded over to her, her limbs begging her to stop or they might rip off;
when she approached the apprentice, the relief to see her flank slowly rising and falling was enough to instill her with enough motivation that she was able to grab the apprentice by the scruff, pulling her from her place in the fallen snow.
Duskpaw voiced no objections. The cat was lifeless underneath her jaw, and Willowflight knew she had very little time.
She dragged the apprentice through the snow, leaving a sad trail from the spot where she'd been found.
How long had she been there, like that? Lying freezing in the unrelenting cold? The night was nearly over, and yet, the cold hadn't ceased but instead grown stronger. Tomorrow's day would be one of the worst they'd ever have to face.
"Come on," Willowflight mewed to the apprentice, if not to herself, "Come on."
The wind picked up more steadily now, bringing it's frost with it. It blasted Willowflight from both sides, and left her staggering, swaying back and forth uneasily.
The clan was still so far away, yet -
She wouldn't make it.
She thought it and knew it to be true, the realization as her legs stopped working and her ears nearly caught fire from the chill, her nerves nearly severed from the sheer calamity of the weather, that even with the dying apprentice in her mouth and a flame of determination in her heart, she would fall into the snow, bringing Duskpaw down with her, and succumb to it, making the spot she laid among the snowflakes her final tomb.
She collapsed after 3 more steps.
A little more, she thought, a little more.
Duskpaw's breathing slowed down to nearly nothing next to her, and Willowflight had a thought, that if she could not save herself she could save her clan's future.
Slowly, and with the last of her strength, she climbed over the apprentice, opening herself up to the harsh wind and wrapping around Duskpaw like a blanket. The warmth from her body fled into the young cat's beneath her, and while Willowflight felt herself fading away, the young apprentice began stirring underneath her.
"The sun," Duskpaw mewed as Willowflight slowly lost her consciousness.
Duskpaw mewed something else, but Willowflight could no longer hear her, her body falling into shock.
She dreamed of flowers blooming underneath a sweltering sun and a clear blue sky, a river flowing full of fish jumping in and out of it, warming their scales; of her clan all together under the sun, taking in it's rays and becoming one under it's sky.
She opened her eyes, and suddenly, it wasn't a dream anymore.
Above Willowflight was a pure blue sky, and in the middle of it, the sun, shining more bright with more flare than ever -
around her, the snow was melting rapidly, giving way to the grass; somewhere in the distance, the lake, once frozen, now began swimming back to life.
She looked around. It seemed the snow was not the only thing melting; her limbs slowly regained their power as they were thawed by the sun, and as she took in a breath, her lungs seemed to be doing the same.
Underneath her, Duskpaw stirred, woken by the sun for the first time in moons.
"They listened," She gasped. "It's back. The sun is back, Willowflight!"
Willowflight found nothing in herself to reply, stuck gazing out at the infinite sky above her, stunning and crystalline blue.
She broke into a smile.
Staring at the sky, her eyes burning under the sun's warmth, she mewed to herself softly, "Thank you."



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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby Griffin Torrens » Mon Nov 25, 2019 10:16 am

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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby opti-mism » Mon Nov 25, 2019 12:50 pm

username: opti-mism
cat name: Rosesnap
gender: she-cat
age: 28 moons
clan: Saltclan
rank: Warrior

prompt:
It laid just beyond the reach of sunlight in the caverns, but Rosesnap knew the path like the back of her paw. With her eyes closed, she wove her way through the corridors, illuminated only by the scarcely glowing plants. The Sparkstone sat before her, dark as night and sheltered by the stone. It was not illuminated, but she knew what needed to be done to illuminate the space.

Sparks flew around her as she raked them down the stone. The claws, a staple to Saltclan, were crucial. They must be kept in the best shape they could at all time, and hers were always flawless. There was not a single mark on them. They were gleaming white, besides one onyx black claw, where her dark marks touched her toe. Well polished, but every chance she had, she sharpened them. Rosesnap would not be caught unaware. If they weren't sharp, they weren't useful.

The claws. These were what took down enemies of the clan. These claws clung to the cliff walls, pulling her to the wide open air that looked out over the seas. These claws, that pulled apprentices from their sleepy dens to chuff them over the ears for their laziness.

They were one of the only things that she could rely on, even more so than her clan members. These 16 claws meant more to her than her clan members combined, a last line of defense. Cats would bow before these claws, she would make sure of it.

She was the rose, and these were her precious thorns. They are all that she is thankful for.

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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby Meoauniaea » Mon Nov 25, 2019 1:31 pm

username: Syelfavaki
cat name: Strikekit (Strikepaw, Strikeplume)
gender: Female (dfab)
age: 4 moons
clan: ElmClan
rank: kit

prompt:
He's growing up and I'm fading away in his mind
These feelings grow weaker between us
Each day I wake up, and I fall apart
Seeing the way you ignore me
Things were once great but now they're not
We used to do everything together
But now you're a teen and I'm still a kid
The chasm between us grows deeper

she and her older half brother grew apart after he became an apprentice.

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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby kamelgirl » Mon Nov 25, 2019 4:38 pm

    username: kamelgirl
    cat name: scorchpaw (scorchflight)
    gender: she-cat
    age: 19 moons
    clan: rimeclan
    rank: apprentice

    prompt: Dappledlight watches Scorchpaw watch the mouse like it'll jump up and bite her, and feels something hollow in her belly. "Are you not hungry?" she asks the apprentice (her apprentice! that'll take some getting used to).

    Scorchpaw looks up at her, eyes blown wide. "O-oh! No, ma'am. O' course not."

    Dappledlight knows this is a lie. She's been with Scorchpaw all day, hunting and training and fighting, and she knows the kid hasn't had a bite to eat since dawn. The kid must know that too. If she knows I know she's lying, why'd she even bother? Dappledlight fidgets, a little uncomfortably, wishing Eveningstar had seen fit to apprentice Scorchpaw to someone else. I've never mentored anyone before! she thinks mutinously. I don't know how kids work. Why couldn't she have gone to someone who knows what they're doing?

    But - like it or not - Dappledlight is this cat's mentor, and it's her responsibility to take care of her apprentice. Even if that apprentice seems set on not taking care of herself.

    "You've been working hard all day," she says, feeling clumsy. "You must be starving."

    Scorchpaw looks at her, really looks at her - and Dappledlight thinks maybe the kid sees something that she herself doesn't, because Scorchpaw straightens up, posture suddenly flawless. "I'm not hungry at all, ma'am," she says with a smile. "I haven't done much today, after all."

    Dappledlight catches her lip between her teeth. There's something not right here, and this is way above her paygrade. But that smile rings so terribly hollow, and this kid is supposed to be under her protection. Time to give up on subtlety. "Scorchpaw, I really think you should eat something," she says bluntly. "You've done well today and you need to keep up your strength."

    For the first time, Scorchpaw's expression flickers. "N-no thank you," she whispers, but her resolve is clearly wearing down. Her eyes flick towards the mouse and for a heartbeat a flicker of ravenous hunger crosses her face. Then it's gone and she's looking up at Dappledlight with that same placid look. "You don't have to test me, ma'am," the apprentice tells her earnestly.

    "Test you?" Dappledlight repeats, drawing back in surprise. "What?"

    "I didn't catch a single thing when we hunted," Scorchpaw says, looking back at the mouse. Her entire body is shaking with hunger, but she doesn't move. "I won't eat what I didn't catch."

    ... oh, she thinks. Oh. "Scorchpaw," Dappledlight says, softening her tone. "Before you came here - if you didn't catch anything, did you get to eat? In your old group?"

    "No," Scorchpaw whispers. "I didn't."

    Dappledlight considers this, weighs her previous assessment of her apprentice against this new information. "I don't know what you went through with your old group, Scorchpaw," she says gently. "But in Rimeclan, you're allowed to eat even if you didn't catch anything at all."

    "Oh." Scorchpaw draws the mouse closer, hesitantly, as though she's afraid Dappledlight will snatch it away. She looks up at her - waiting for permission, maybe? - and the look in her eyes nearly breaks Dappledlight's heart.

    "Go ahead," Dappledlight murmurs.

    Permission granted, her apprentice tears into the mouse with all the ravening hunger of a famished wolf. "'s so good," she mumbles through a mouthful. "'m so glad I'm in Rimeclan now."

    Dappledlight smiles through the ache in her chest. "I'm glad you're here too, Scorchpaw," she says, and finds she means it.
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Re: Rise | #2522

Postby liightning » Thu Dec 26, 2019 10:17 am


    Your story was just so sweet! Congrats kamelgirl! I'll also award an HM to orbiting because I really loved the emotion.

    Sorry for the wait on this everyone; I hope you all have a lovely Christmas, if you celebrate it <3
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    username: kamelgirl
    cat name: scorchpaw (scorchflight)
    gender: she-cat
    age: 19 moons
    clan: rimeclan
    rank: apprentice
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