This poor little ladybug is blowing away...
My second oekaki, and I'm really looking for constructive crits and tips for this one. Advice especially needed for the ladybug's anatomy and the feathery ends. Mods can move this if they feel it isn't intermediate. Drawn with mouse, and with one reference. I tried to get it as close to the photo as possible, but didn't quite make it realistic enough. Any ideas?
Edit: Smudged and blurred the feathery ends a bit.
Edit: Added light streaks.
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Hold on Tight... by Geode
| Artist | Geode [gallery] |
| Time spent | 43 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 3 |
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Hold on Tight...
by Geode » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:00 am
Last edited by Geode on Thu Jan 20, 2011 11:28 am, edited 3 times in total.
Three of my favorite pastimes.
Three things I stand for in accordance with the Bible.
Three things that have affected my life.
~ My Fursona ~
Mark 12:28-31 (NIV) wrote:"Of all the commandments,
which is the most important?"
"The most important one,"
answered Jesus, "is this:
'LOVE the Lord your God
with all your HEART
and with all your SOUL
and with all your MIND
and with all your STRENGTH.'
The second is this:
'LOVE your neighbor as yourself.'
There is no commandment
greater than these."
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by The Last Raven » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:08 am
Very pretty
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❝ hi! i’m a long time player
who loves to hoard chameleons
and anything else that tickles my fancy.
i am a huge nerd and love to cosplay!❞
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collection dream❞
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by TurtleGoBoom! » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:09 am
That is amazing!
I USED TO BE DRACULASPUDDING & NarwhalsWin<3
I LOVE MY POPTART CAT THAT MAKES RAINBOWS
<.< <3 Anyways, heres my list of stuff:3.
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•Send more trades. (Im very lazy >.<)
•Stay away from people with mustaches. We all know the saying, guns don't kill people, people with mustaches kill people.
•Get some friends here on CS and actually talk to them on the forums..>.>
•Stop stalking the Charloo Thread.
~Alright bye! OH and I love trades! :3~
P.S.I want some really cool random friends on CS. Im friendly.(:
I LOVE MY POPTART CAT THAT MAKES RAINBOWS
<.< <3 Anyways, heres my list of stuff:3.
•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•
•Send more trades. (Im very lazy >.<)
•Stay away from people with mustaches. We all know the saying, guns don't kill people, people with mustaches kill people.
•Get some friends here on CS and actually talk to them on the forums..>.>
•Stop stalking the Charloo Thread.
~Alright bye! OH and I love trades! :3~
P.S.I want some really cool random friends on CS. Im friendly.(:
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by Geode » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:28 am
Thanks so much for all the kind comments, I can't believe this only took around 40 minutes!
Any crits or tips?
Any crits or tips?
Three of my favorite pastimes.
Three things I stand for in accordance with the Bible.
Three things that have affected my life.
~ My Fursona ~
Mark 12:28-31 (NIV) wrote:"Of all the commandments,
which is the most important?"
"The most important one,"
answered Jesus, "is this:
'LOVE the Lord your God
with all your HEART
and with all your SOUL
and with all your MIND
and with all your STRENGTH.'
The second is this:
'LOVE your neighbor as yourself.'
There is no commandment
greater than these."
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by Telescope » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:31 am
Maybe try to make the feathery tips a little more 3-D? That's the only think I see :]
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by Geode » Tue Jan 18, 2011 3:14 am
3D? I'm not sure how but I'll see what I can do.
Three of my favorite pastimes.
Three things I stand for in accordance with the Bible.
Three things that have affected my life.
~ My Fursona ~
Mark 12:28-31 (NIV) wrote:"Of all the commandments,
which is the most important?"
"The most important one,"
answered Jesus, "is this:
'LOVE the Lord your God
with all your HEART
and with all your SOUL
and with all your MIND
and with all your STRENGTH.'
The second is this:
'LOVE your neighbor as yourself.'
There is no commandment
greater than these."
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by •Bliss• » Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:11 am
I am jealous. *Envies Geode's artistic skill*
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by -Stormy- » Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:17 am
This is very good!! I can't really see much to criticize, except maybe make it a little like the sun is shining on it to give it a shine? That's the only thing, but this is great!! Good job! 
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Re: Hold on Tight...
by Geode » Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:50 am
Better? I think that really helped it a lot, thanks!
Three of my favorite pastimes.
Three things I stand for in accordance with the Bible.
Three things that have affected my life.
~ My Fursona ~
Mark 12:28-31 (NIV) wrote:"Of all the commandments,
which is the most important?"
"The most important one,"
answered Jesus, "is this:
'LOVE the Lord your God
with all your HEART
and with all your SOUL
and with all your MIND
and with all your STRENGTH.'
The second is this:
'LOVE your neighbor as yourself.'
There is no commandment
greater than these."
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