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Iditarod by InsomniacFox

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Time spent 1 hour, 28 minutes
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Iditarod

Postby InsomniacFox » Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:05 am

@.@ My first ever lineless art~! It fails. :F It's my char Iditarod. He's a little Husky :3 I really need to do contest art and commissions now. ;_; And comments/ crits on how to draw better lineless art would be very obliged! (Please. I need it D8)

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Re: Iditarod

Postby booklover789 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:24 am

I actually quite like it. :) I don't think you failed at all.
But since you asked for critique, I'll give it. I'm afraid the tail is the most unrealistic thing in this piece. You need to work on how to get more realistic fur as well. I think it would've been better if you would've smudged or possibly blurred some of the fur to make it look a bit better, but that's just my opinion. As for the lineless art thing, I think you've got it down. Just.....don't add a white out-line to this. That makes it seem less like a line-less line art.
I don't mean to insult, this is just my opinion that you asked for.
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Re: Iditarod

Postby InsomniacFox » Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:49 am

Thanks for the crit 8D And i'm probably going to go back and edit it :3 Thanks again for the crit, it really helped 8D
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Re: Iditarod

Postby booklover789 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:09 am

BloodSoul wrote:Thanks for the crit 8D And i'm probably going to go back and edit it :3 Thanks again for the crit, it really helped 8D

You're welcome. :D
Recently came back to this after you edited.
Looks great now! Tail and background look MUCH better!
The only thing I'd change now is the fur on his/her stomach. Since you've got part of it already there, why not do it all?
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Re: Iditarod

Postby Nobodeh » Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:37 pm

Looks awesome <3 One piece of advice, maybe the ear should be angled differently. I dunno it just loks a bit off to me, but thats me XD
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Re: Iditarod

Postby InsomniacFox » Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:51 pm

Yeah, the ear does look herp derpy xD I don't know how a floppy ear would look at a frontal angle, maybe I should get moar refs xD
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Re: Iditarod

Postby booklover789 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:18 pm

Great job on the editing. :)
Here's ref for a floppy ear: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=htt ... x=64&ty=53
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Re: Iditarod

Postby .Gone.Traveling. » Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:19 pm

I love this, great job!
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Re: Iditarod

Postby snowstorm321 » Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:56 pm

Amazing! One tip: about the ear, it looks like the back of the ear, just folded over. instead of that, maybe have a little of the inside of the ear showing... :D
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Re: Iditarod

Postby ~*Kay*~ » Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:10 am

SIBERIAN HUSKEYS R MAH FAVORITE DOGGIES EVER!!!!!!!! good job :clap:
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