[SurgeFire]

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!

To claim you must be at least level 1 or not have a founder in progress or a founder at all. Please be sure you have room in your clan before applying for this cat.

This cat may not be traded until: date
There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.

Final one for the night.
What's this cat's fatal flaw? The worst part about them?
Explain it in a scene that shows their flaw in action, not just a telling.
Min: 50 words
Max: 500 words
End Date: August 21st, 2019

Username: Firedancer77
Cat Name: Littlefang
Clan: Underclan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: She-cat
Age: 24 moons
Description: Cream mackerel tabby with high white and orange eyes.

Other Features: None
Siblings: None Living

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Father: Foundation
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Dam: Foundation
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[sylveonsweetie987]

Username;; sylveonsweetie987
Cat Name;; Hazelchitter
Gender;; Male
Age;; 16 moons
Clan;; Honeyclan, link in sig
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;; res. going to have this cat's flaw be habitual lying, demonstrated by lying about chasing away a fox on patrol that they actually had to run away from so he can look better

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[Shadowflight13]

Username;; Shadowflight13
Cat Name;;
Gender;;
Age;;
Clan;;
Rank;;

Prompt;; possible wip?? such a pretty cat :0

[ataraxic_gone]

Username;; dewly_noted
Cat Name;; DaisyPaw
Gender;; NB [dmab]
Age;; 6 moons
Clan;; BeachClan
Rank;; trainee

Prompt;;
Their rear raised off the ground, a gently wiggle before a splay of claws travelled across the forest with their attached. Their form rumpled and rolled, gently scrambling their paws to keep a solid grip on the wiggling form between their paws. With one, two and three pulls the brown fur that had once been caught in their iron grip slipped away into the void beyond the bushes. Their breathe came out in one long puff, escaping and dissipating into the air around them.

The ground swayed slightly under paw as the escaped breathe rushed back into their chest. The dirt worked it's way under their paws and into the gaps between their claws. The blood rushed to their ears and with another huffed breathe DaisyPaw turned on their heels. There was a rustling behind them but Daisy paid no heed.

The walk home was shorter than expected and as Daisy rounded the entry to the camp they were cut off by their mother, FlowerPond.

"You're back from hunting sooner than expected, how did your first solo hunting trip go?"

FlowerPond would wait an eternity for the answer as DaisyPaw stormed passed, their face feeling redder and redder with each moment past until they were surrounded by their nests warm fuzz.

Outside ears perked as a muffled noise echoed out from the trainees den. [224]

[Mythz]

Username;; Mythz
Cat Name;; Gingersnap
Gender;; Molly
Age;; 14 Moons
Clan;; Wishclan
Rank;; Stalker

Prompt;;
"Now remember, always expect the unexpected." Greywind said, pacing back and forth. His pale fur glinted in the sun as his skin rippled across his muscly build.
It was their weekly training exercise, and Greywind was starting with his favourite line.
However, Gingersnap wasn’t having any of it, which is why she lent towards Riverstone and whispered loud enough for everyone to hear, "Doesn’t expecting the unexpected make the unexpected expected?"
The whole group of cats groaned, except for Riverstone who snickered at her words.
Mousebone rolled her eyes, calling out over the top of the cats who had started murmuring. "One of these days, that smart little mouth of yours will get you into some serious trouble. "
Racconmask snorted. "Odds are you’ll make one witty remark too many and meet a tragic, easily preventable end that surprises no one."
Gingersnap glared daggers at Raccoonmask – she was seething with fury.
Ebonyfang laughed. "You’ll be mourned, of course, but we would’ve all seen it coming, and you most likely would’ve of deserved it."
"Enough!" Greywind called, before Gingersnap could retaliate.
"Now. Let’s continue, shall we?"

[hawkfire102]

Username;; hawkfire102
Cat Name;; Brackentail
Gender;; Male
Age;; 54 moons
Clan;; SycamoreClan
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;;

Brackentail barely registered the cat in front of him. Dark fog was surrounding his peripheral vision. He dugs his claws into the ground as he snarled. He could hear goading in his ears. He lunged at his opponent, barreling the smaller cat over. The cat tried to get to their paws but Brackentail pinned them down, digging his claws into their side. The cat hissed and smacked him with their paw. He could hear his pulse pounding in his ears. He bit into the cat under him, the cat struggling.

He could barely hear the shouting until another force barreled into him. He tumbled on the ground before leaping to his paws but not before he felt a heavy hit strike him. He stumbled and looked up to see Birchheart standing over him, livid. He looked around dazed to see Owlpaw staggering to his paws and limping out of the clearing. Brackentail felt cold as guilt swept over him.

"What has gotta into you!" Birchheart hissed at him. Brackentail looked up at him, wide-eyed and mouth gaping.

"I-I'm sorry.." He quickly got to his paws and bolted out of the clearing.

He didn't stop until he was alone. He felt his body shaking as he curled his tail around himself. He thought he left that life behind him when he left his father's group. He thought he left all of those fights in the past. The battle to stay alive and make his father proud of him. He felt tears sting at his eyes. How could his clan trust him after this? If his past kept flaring up like this, would they even let him stay?

The normally stoic cat curled into himself and let out a sob. How could he change this before he gets himself killed or hurt someone he cared about in the process?

[Firedancer77]

Username;; Firedancer77
Cat Name;; Littlefang
Gender;; She-cat
Age;; 24 moons
Clan;; Underclan
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;;

The dirt and rocks shook and began to slide downwards. Littlepaw glanced around wildly, crying out as she began to scamper away from the destruction.

"Littlepaw!" From behind her, her mentor howled, causing the apprentice to halt and look back, tears in her eyes. "Littlepaw, please, help me."

"I-I-" The small apprentice started to come back, but then a few more stones fell in front of her. "I-I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry! I can't!"

"Littlepaw! I'm going to die!" The choked scream followed behind her as the she-cat continued to flee the sight. "You selfish coward! I'm your mentor and your clanmate! You'll never be a proper tunneler!"

Littlepaw continued to run, shaking her head as she continued to cry over and over. "I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry!" She kept repeating the words, even after she'd stumbled out of the tunnels.

She was a coward. An absolute coward. That was her mentor, and she'd let them die. But she couldn't do it. She couldn't be a tunneler. She couldn't be a hero. She was too selfish and scared, and her mentor's death was all her fault.

[SurgeFire]

I forgot to post, but this contest has been closed since August 21st. No entries after that will be considered.

[SurgeFire]

Username;; Firedancer77
Cat Name;; Littlefang
Gender;; She-cat
Age;; 24 moons
Clan;; Underclan
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;;

The dirt and rocks shook and began to slide downwards. Littlepaw glanced around wildly, crying out as she began to scamper away from the destruction.

"Littlepaw!" From behind her, her mentor howled, causing the apprentice to halt and look back, tears in her eyes. "Littlepaw, please, help me."

"I-I-" The small apprentice started to come back, but then a few more stones fell in front of her. "I-I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry! I can't!"

"Littlepaw! I'm going to die!" The choked scream followed behind her as the she-cat continued to flee the sight. "You selfish coward! I'm your mentor and your clanmate! You'll never be a proper tunneler!"

Littlepaw continued to run, shaking her head as she continued to cry over and over. "I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry!" She kept repeating the words, even after she'd stumbled out of the tunnels.

She was a coward. An absolute coward. That was her mentor, and she'd let them die. But she couldn't do it. She couldn't be a tunneler. She couldn't be a hero. She was too selfish and scared, and her mentor's death was all her fault.

oh my you absolutely made me feel emotion with this one ;o;,,
you did the flaw nicely, congrats!!
little fang, little fang, little faangg
'd love to give a hm to hawkfire102 ;o