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Sunset on the Beach by Swiftnose

Artist Swiftnose [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 25 minutes
Drawing sessions 3
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Sunset on the Beach

Postby Swiftnose » Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:32 pm

Short fail drawing. The background wouldn't really cooperate, so I might have to work on that a bit later.
Drawing people is one of my worst weaknesses, so tips on how to improve that are welcome, or any other tips for that matter.
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Re: Sunset on the Beach

Postby correlate. » Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:35 pm

Hmm...
I think that her ear should sit a bit lower, and that her shoulders, back, and arm should be closer in size to her stomach and the size you've set for her neck^^
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