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I need criticism by Ja986

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I need criticism

Postby Ja986 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 8:24 am

I need hard criticism! just on the cat shape though! I am practicing drawing a cat silhouette for my digital art program class
Sorry if the messy lines for the widow sill annoy you! Like I said I was just trying to do the cat silhouette.
Thanks a ton guys!
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Re: I need criticism

Postby Ja986 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 8:28 am

Bump!
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Re: I need criticism

Postby Ja986 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 9:32 am

Bump!
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Re: I need criticism

Postby lilacpetals<3 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 9:32 am

May I redline?
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Re: I need criticism

Postby Expired_Karma » Thu Jun 20, 2019 9:35 am

Ok so I think the tail should be longer due to the size of the cat,the stomach should be more curved outwards,cats back should be a little more smooth when you do the arch,and I think the muzzle should be more sharp where the nose is and a little less round.

This is just criticism and my opinion please don’t think I was trying to insult you 🙏
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Re: I need criticism

Postby Ja986 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 1:07 pm

lilac,, wrote:May I redline?


Sure!
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Re: I need criticism

Postby lilacpetals<3 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 1:08 pm

Ja986 wrote:
lilac,, wrote:May I redline?


Sure!


Could you add me to the drawing? :D
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Re: I need criticism

Postby Ja986 » Thu Jun 20, 2019 1:08 pm

AkikoAyama wrote:Ok so I think the tail should be longer due to the size of the cat,the stomach should be more curved outwards,cats back should be a little more smooth when you do the arch,and I think the muzzle should be more sharp where the nose is and a little less round.

This is just criticism and my opinion please don’t think I was trying to insult you 🙏


No no thanks a ton! I will keep this in mind!
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Re: I need criticism

Postby Bubble boy » Sat Jun 29, 2019 2:19 pm

AkikoAyama wrote:Ok so I think the tail should be longer due to the size of the cat,the stomach should be more curved outwards,cats back should be a little more smooth when you do the arch,and I think the muzzle should be more sharp where the nose is and a little less round.

This is just criticism and my opinion please don’t think I was trying to insult you 🙏

i agree 👍
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