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WIP NEED FEEBACK by hotel?trivago.

Artist hotel?trivago. [gallery]
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WIP NEED FEEBACK

Postby hotel?trivago. » Tue Feb 19, 2019 9:38 am

first time doing realistic people lol
i feel like she's too masculine?? can someone feed me some tips <3
i really need it lol
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Re: WIP NEED FEEBACK

Postby TheCrowAtMidnight » Tue Feb 19, 2019 12:29 pm

Ok here is something that will make it look more realistic. From the angle you drew her, you would not see her other eye, also to me she does not look too masculine, keep up the good work :)
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Re: WIP NEED FEEBACK

Postby dawnchu » Tue Feb 19, 2019 12:32 pm

I think she looks masculine because of her jaw and jawline. Females' jawlines have a tendency to be shorter, softer and rounder. The jaw is too low under the lips, because if you look at a reference it would be closer together. Hope this helps!
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Re: WIP NEED FEEBACK

Postby _silentsiren_ » Tue Feb 19, 2019 12:38 pm

If you add me, I'd be happy to redline it? :^)
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Re: WIP NEED FEEBACK

Postby hotel?trivago. » Tue Feb 19, 2019 2:13 pm

TheCrowAtMidnight wrote:Ok here is something that will make it look more realistic. From the angle you drew her, you would not see her other eye, also to me she does not look too masculine, keep up the good work :)


Alright,, thank you for the tip!! And thank you in general ! <3

utau0223 wrote:I think she looks masculine because of her jaw and jawline. Females' jawlines have a tendency to be shorter, softer and rounder. The jaw is too low under the lips, because if you look at a reference it would be closer together. Hope this helps!
Thank you! This helps a lot ! <3

_silentsiren_ wrote:If you add me, I'd be happy to redline it? :^)

adding now <3
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