[Octomonn]

Ehh this is a wip, I'm attempting a new artstyle but ehhhhh I'm not sure If it looks good or not ;^; any constructive feedback on how I can improve so far?

[bug;‌‌‌‏‏‏‏‏]

not bad! the anatomy could use some work though (so maybe try looking at basic form?)

[Octomonn]

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[Perrio]

i like the stylization! the geometric shapes mixing with circles is really neat. id also recommend more anatomy research (for example, ears are lower down and necks connect to the back of the head), since anatomy applies even to more simple artwork. i also like the eyelid, and if you made the shading on it cleaner rather than faded it could really make the style work. other than that, the color choices are nice and the fact that you did a further draw on the picture rather than just a bust shows skill. really good job!