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WIP by boxcarr

Artist boxcarr [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 44 minutes
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WIP

Postby boxcarr » Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:56 am

This isnt finished yet, i still need to add the grass and possibly a second girl... X3
Im using a ref, but i cant really post it, its a painting in the living room... but i am using a reference, just saying.
Il try to get some more done soon, but im having difficulties with the grass... its supposed to be a long grass thats all along the sand in little clumps... any advice?
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Re: WIP

Postby Graysen » Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:56 am

This reminds me of Big Sandy Bay! I love how you did the clouds and the waves! My only suggestions would be to have small lines with the grass here and there that are slightly lighter or darker, and that the horizon of the sea is a bit unnaturally straight. /is perfectionist
Just play around with it, you'll figure something out, I'm sure. :3

This is absolutely amazing, Bryn, I luvs eet. ^.^ <3
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Re: WIP

Postby boxcarr » Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:13 pm

Ok, il try that with the grass, and as i was reading about the horizon being so straight, i was nodding... yeah, i compleetly agree, but i dont know how i would change that though... il try and make it off that straightness a little, but yeah... not much i can do... ^^ Thank-you!

^^I thought you would. Oh, and do you think i should add the other person? or... ? She would be you of corse, cuz i think of the existing girl to look like me when i was younger. X3
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Re: WIP

Postby Graysen » Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:39 pm

Yeah, I agree with what you said about the horizon. It should still be somewhat straight, but maybe just do slight, very small changes to it so it's not perfect. You know what I mean. =P

XD Of course you should! Or at least try. :3 I mean, if you just can't get her right, then that's no problem, don't worry, but yesh, I would love to join you in the awesomesauce pic! =D

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Re: WIP

Postby ratsy » Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:32 am

Cool!
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Re: WIP

Postby boxcarr » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:05 am

Omaigawd this thing is old... x.x
I still can't draw humans. X3
Thanks Philly. :D
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