Pierre Readoption (winner pg 3) by mal du pays

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Pierre Readoption (winner pg 3)

Postby mal du pays » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:06 pm

At the request of the original owner, this girl is up for readoption!

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She has all of her breeding slots. She has several pieces of art on her toyhou.se page.
Name & gender may be changed.

This contest will be relatively understandable - a limited impress me! You have 1500 words and 5 pieces of art. You may make the 5 art pieces a comic, but any words in the panels will count toward your word count. Simple animations (blinks, bounce) are fine, complex animations are not. If art is purchased, please make sure to credit the artist (to be fair, artist credits will not count toward the word count.)
Art should be made specifically for this contest, please do not use bases.

The rules for this contest, read them carefully as they're important:
1.) You get one post on this thread. To ask for extensions or ask a question, please PM me. Posting outside of your main form post will result in disqualification.
2.) Separate thread forms are okay, website forms are not. They must be linked in your one post.
3.) Prettying up is fine, but your form must be legible. If you use decorative borders, please provide credit.
4.) Including a word count would be appreciated.
5.) Art theft will result in immediate disqualification. Don't steal.
6.) Please. Please don't make your concept something that will break CS rules.
7.) Extensions will only be granted if the user(s) asking for one has made progress on their form. If you want to enter, make sure to post & get some work done!

Moodboards & playlists are allowed without counting toward word/art limit, just try not to go overboard with them

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This will end in 1 month, on 10/27. Extensions may be granted if requested.
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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby mango marmalade,, » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:10 pm

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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby sobble » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:13 pm

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    Prone to experiencing mental illness, please be nice.
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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby black water » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:16 pm

dropping out
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pierre

Postby SilentMelody » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:24 pm

username: silentmelody
kalon name: pierre earhart
kalon gender: female


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diary of pierre


    july 1st, 1937
    today is the day that i will attempt to fly across the atlantic ocean. no one has done it before, and i wish to be the first. well, no woman has accomplished this before. so i'll be the first.

    i've got everything set up, and "the canary" is revving to go. i've got enough gas for the plane. i've also got enough food and water for myself. it all just depends on how the weather fares and if i lose visual contact in the air. i have high hopes for this trip.

    well, i've got to be off now. i have a plane to catch!

    july 2nd, 1937
    how did i get stranded? it's quite simple actually.

    the clouds had gotten thicker in the air than i expected before i took off. about two hours into the flight, my vision was blocked completely. i could see nothing but dark clouds, and a lighting strike to the front propeller sent my plane reeling.

    i remember nothing afterwards. well, at least until i woke up on this island.

    i should stop writing now. i've got to figure out my situation. you'll keep me company, right?

    july 3rd, 1937
    today i made friends with a lemur. somehow my path strayed away from the atlantic ocean, and i'm somewhere in madagascar.

    i'm really tired and sore after my crash, but the lemur taught me how to climb. it was weird climbing without boots, but it was easier to do so. my hind paws hurt now, but eventually calluses will develop.

    the lemur is really cute. i named him "zebra" because of the rings on his tail. it's not an accurate description of him, but i couldn't think of any other good names at the time. besides, i've never owned a pet.

    in all honesty, i don't mind being stranded alone on this island. i'm not completely alone -- the animals keep me company, and they're good company too. i'm away from all the hustle and bustle of human life, especially the cities. it's nice to breathe fresh air.

    of course, this doesn't mean that i wouldn't ever want to be rescued. my place is in the air, and i don't have the equipment to fix "the canary". my poor, beautiful yellow biplane. i hate to see it go to waste like this. it breaks my heart. she belongs in the sky, too.

    soon enough, i know i'll be rescued. i just don't know how...or how long.

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the rest of the entries are either torn out or washed away by water.
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𝚊 𝚛 𝚢 𝚊 | pierre readopt

Postby knifekind » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:32 pm

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arya, trans woman, bisexual
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-------------Image-- your name is ARYA WELLINGTON, and you are renown as
-----------------=----an EXTREMELY TALENTED SCIENTIST within the confides
-----------------=----of the scientific community. you are a GIFTED DOCTOR,
------------------=---with an aptitude for MEDICATIONAL SCIENCE, as well as
-----------------=----CYBERNETICS and ROBOTICS. you work for the company
-----------------=----SALAZAR INCORPORATED as their head scientologist, a
-----------------=----career you find INCREDIBLY ENTERTAINING. you do not
-----------------=----know much about the inside of SALAZAR INCORPORATED,
-----------------=----but you find it easier to SMILE AND NOD in the occasion
-----------------=----that your perception is challenged. you are currently in
-----------------=----the middle of creating a brand new collection of CYBER
-----------------=----PSYCHOLOGICAL IMPLANTS for your company, which you
-----------------=----love, you remind yourself. suddenly, you realize there is
-----------------=----a LOUD AND IRRITABLE NOISE coming directly from the
-----------------=----door of your VERY NICE AND CLEAN laboratory. what do
-----------------=--------------=-------=----you do?

-----------------=-==---------=------Examine loud noise ==>
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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby rustyroxy » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:38 pm

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!rustyroxy // five // female
this isn't gonna be a big entry bc life stuff but here we go anyways i might pretty it up later

general information
    -original name is unknown, goes by "five"
    -biological parents/guardians known, they refuse to speak of them
    -unable to create or fix any sort of mechanical object(s) but able to procure ciro to do so for her
    -is trying to learn how to operate machinery (a wanna be steampunk girl) with ciro's assistance
how they live
    -they go with the flow unless something terrible occurs, then they face the problem(s) head on
    -more info here
interactions w/ my other kals
-tobin ; some what neutral acquaintanceship, leaning towards negative
    -tobin doesn't like five's decisions, doesn't think highly of her but doesn't dislike her
    -tobin sees her as a bad influence on others, actually dislikes her a bit
-ciro ; positive friendship
    -ciro sees themselves as close friends, unsure of how five labels themselves

[?? /1500 words]
[0/5 art]
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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby mellow yellow. » Fri Sep 28, 2018 1:45 pm

Mark yes please
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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby deerbroken » Fri Sep 28, 2018 2:09 pm

Username: neongraveyard
Name: Laura Mirai [Mirai means "the future" in japanese]
Gender: trans female
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Re: Pierre Readoption

Postby carnivorous. » Fri Sep 28, 2018 2:35 pm

"I'm waking up, I feel it in my bones,"


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Name: Paige Dean
Gender: Female
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Bubbles danced to the surface of vials of bright green liquid, that gently illuminated the dark, pristine room.
A pair of eyes stared unamusedly at the substances, glinting in frustration.
Another test. Another failure.
“Doctor Dean?” A sophisticated sounding voice called.
The one-eyed kalon slowly turned her head to stare at the figure.

“The treatment is needed urgently. The subject’s radiation poisoning is progressively getting worse.”

“I need time! Leave me alone!” Paige snapped, causing the fellow doctor to flinch and step away slowly.
Her stubborn personality was well known around here, so the doctor didn’t try to argue, but her personality had never before gone as far as to actually endanger another kalon’s life.
A lump built in her throat.
They weren’t going to live much longer if she didn’t have a cure.
Frantically, Paige spilt contents of liquid into each other, and into vials.
The dosage would be incredibly strong, but it had to work.
It had to work on the patient and couldn't be damaging to others without radiation poisoning.
It had to.
She darted out of the room, her crooked leg, disfigured by a failed experiment, slowing her down.

Frantically, she made it to the testing room, littered with signs of radiation warnings, keeping a firm grip on the vial of liquid that was now fizzing and spitting out drops of fluid. She took a moment to compose herself and opened the door to see her colleagues, bickering over the patient’s chance of survival.

Her eyes gazed slowly over to the patient in another room with windows peering in, who was struggling to stand and was looking nauseous.
As she was about to enter, she was stopped by the same doctor as before, but he seemed a bit more nervous around her.
“You need to test the cure on-“

Paige cut him off by taking a short swig of the irradiated cure, ignoring the harsh, chemical taste.
“It’s fine, see?”
It was most definitely not fine.
And just as her signature smirk flashed on her face, her vision began to distort and the ground began to violently sway beneath her.
The last thing she heard was the sound of everyone in the room calling her name before all sound faded into the melody of a liquid bubbling.

The first thing she woke up to was a burning sensation.
Down her throat, in one of her eyes, her entire body just seemed to be… Pulsing?
The kalon roughly sat up, only to have a quick jolt of pain sent through her body like an electric shock.
After slowly recovering from that, she noticed she was in one of the recovery rooms.
Paige immediately noticed that her eyesight in one of her eyes was enhanced, and she could see spectacular details she had never noticed before, and gazed hazily at a fly on a window pane, suddenly noticing the finite details.
However, her other eye was completely dark and she couldn’t see a thing.
Oh god no.
Just as the sinking realisation built, her thoughts were interrupted suddenly by the creaking of a door opening.
"Doctor Dean?" A voice asked slowly and unsurely.
Paige turned her head slightly to glare at the figure with her remaining eye.
"We had to perform emergency enucleation. The radiation built up, and-"
Paige lost interest in him and stared at her paws with a dull look plastered on her face.
They were oozing some sort of sludge.

"I need to get back to work." She interrupted the rambling kalon.
"You can't! You just had surgery," They interrupted, only to again be ignored.
Paige stood up, only to feel another jolt of pain.
The other doctor tried to usher her back to the bed but she was gone in seconds, back to her laboratory.

Throughout the next few weeks, her paws become more and more of a nuisance.
The green liquid they were dripping was considered toxic and harmful to any kalon in a 30-meter radius apart from herself.

Paige immediately left the radiation sciences career.
Not only that, but she left civilisation.
The toxic waste on her paws couldn't harm her in any way, but to any kalon or creature, it had a close to a fatal reaction.

The forest was her first refuge, however, an amount of the plant and wild-life perished as soon as she entered that radius.
Eventually, she found the grasslands.
A large, empty space with grass and limited fauna, she was immediately settled here.

Although it took a lot of effort, within days she had constructed a fort/shelter.
She manages to continue to use herself for tests in that shelter, and so far a majority of them have been successful.

But to every kalon in her previous industry, she had completely vanished from the world.


"Enough to make my systems blow"
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