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My First chibi besides avatar, Need Feedback! by Betta^-^Fish

Artist Betta^-^Fish [gallery]
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My First chibi besides avatar, Need Feedback!

Postby Betta^-^Fish » Fri Aug 10, 2018 5:14 am

HI! be honest, do you like it? i have always wanted to be able to draw anime, so i decided to try chibi! is this ok!!!??? :D
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Re: My First chibi besides avatar, Need Feedback!

Postby scarecrowz » Fri Aug 10, 2018 5:32 am

it looks pretty good for a first try! For any constructive criticism, I think it looks good but maybe try working on the head shape, I think it'd bring the whole thing together!
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Re: My First chibi besides avatar, Need Feedback!

Postby uniiversally » Fri Aug 10, 2018 5:53 am

this is really cute! i love the eyes a lot :o
as jurassic, said above, maybe you could work on the head shape, just a little bit?
and as for my own bit of constructive criticism, maybe you could make the arm lengths a bit more consistent? the right arm is just a little longer than the left c:
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Re: My First chibi besides avatar, Need Feedback!

Postby Betta^-^Fish » Fri Aug 10, 2018 7:04 am

jurassic, wrote:it looks pretty good for a first try! For any constructive criticism, I think it looks good but maybe try working on the head shape, I think it'd bring the whole thing together!

Thank you! I will try to work on the shapes of the heads. I totally see what you mean
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Re: My First chibi besides avatar, Need Feedback!

Postby Betta^-^Fish » Fri Aug 10, 2018 7:06 am

sparklehomo wrote:this is really cute! i love the eyes a lot :o
as jurassic, said above, maybe you could work on the head shape, just a little bit?
and as for my own bit of constructive criticism, maybe you could make the arm lengths a bit more consistent? the right arm is just a little longer than the left c:
. Yep, I noticed that problem while I was making it. I had already made the right arm way in the beginning, then realized that if the character put their arm down, that their right arm would reach the ground. Kinda creepy am I right? I decided to just go with it and make the left arm shorter
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