[~Teya~]

“Where are we going?” Sunora questioned, laughing.
“You’ll see.” Arathorn promised eagerly, tone mysterious. Her curious anticipation growing.
The familiar crash of waves onto sand greeted the viscets ears as the two made their way to the oceans edge. Removing Sunora’s blindfold, Arath gazed down at his friend with a childish thrill she’d never seen before. Looking up at the overcast sky, she watched as the first drops of rain pelted the warm sand.
“Just this once, let’s ignore the weather like when we were kids—and just feel alive!” He urged.
She pondered for a moment, hesitant. “Let’s do it!”

I love how this turned out so much. <3 <3 Any comments or critique is much appreciated.
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[bugbites]

ahh this is so cute! i love the coloring and detail!
one critique tho, i would try to work on the feet. it seems like you're going for a more human design on the feet, so i would just study some references. like for the left foot, the big toe seems to be on the outside instead of the inside if that makes sense. idk, i'm not a very skilled critic ^^'
anyway, this is super adorable and keep up the fantastic work! you've improved so much lately!

[~Teya~]

ahh this is so cute! i love the coloring and detail!
one critique tho, i would try to work on the feet. it seems like you're going for a more human design on the feet, so i would just study some references. like for the left foot, the big toe seems to be on the outside instead of the inside if that makes sense. idk, i'm not a very skilled critic ^^'
anyway, this is super adorable and keep up the fantastic work! you've improved so much lately!

Thank you so much! And ack x.X I didn't notice that, I'll keep that in mind for future drawings.