[~Teya~]

The night was cold and hushed. To Dasher, it seemed as if it knew what was to come. He had sat by his mother day and night, no improvement. More doctors than he was old enough to count came to see her, no improvement. His father promised “Everything is going to be alright.” But no improvement. He prayed for her, he cried for her, he waited for her outside that door in desperation, clinging to his last ounce of hope.
She died that same summer night and he cried himself to sleep—next day . . . no improvement.

eep. ;u; i kinda like how i colored this. any critique is appreciated. <3
ref

[the folly of man]

hi i love ur art k thx bye dghstrhsrdth


okay but... honestly..
I didn't know someone's art could improve so much within the span of a couple months ;o;

[~Teya~]

hi i love ur art k thx bye dghstrhsrdth


okay but... honestly..
I didn't know someone's art could improve so much within the span of a couple months ;o;

aCK, you don't even know how much that means to me c': <3 Thanks Edgy ^^

[corrosive_limes]

edgy's right :0 when i came back from my 5ish month hiatus that started in december, your art had improved so much it was insane

i really like the perspective you were going for!
however, i think the affect could've been improved by adding some more lines in the background that followed the same vanishing point. like if you'd added some lines to the walls that ran parallel to the sides of the door (maybe, maybe not) and had the floor lines a bit more "exaggerated" almost by having the lines closer together closer to the door and farther apart closer to Dasher(?)
there's also something about the perspective that could've been improved with some sort of perspective to do with Dasher but i just can't for the life of me figure out how to put it into words so? idk
but i gotta say, the shading is super good (it makes me think of firelight :0c ) and i love the way you colored / shaded the background <3

[~Teya~]

edgy's right :0 when i came back from my 5ish month hiatus that started in december, your art had improved so much it was insane

i really like the perspective you were going for!
however, i think the affect could've been improved by adding some more lines in the background that followed the same vanishing point. like if you'd added some lines to the walls that ran parallel to the sides of the door (maybe, maybe not) and had the floor lines a bit more "exaggerated" almost by having the lines closer together closer to the door and farther apart closer to Dasher(?)
there's also something about the perspective that could've been improved with some sort of perspective to do with Dasher but i just can't for the life of me figure out how to put it into words so? idk
but i gotta say, the shading is super good (it makes me think of firelight :0c ) and i love the way you colored / shaded the background <3

Thank you Corrosive!! ;0; I'll try to mess around with the critique you mentioned to see if I can make it look better. <3 And I actually get what you mean with Dasher, I just couldn't find a good reference to go off of to improve that. But thanks so much for the critique and compliments !! I've always admired your art from afar. c;