[saraphena]

click based on to see my original sketch of her.

i have been practicing a lot, but can't seem to make it look good ;-;
am i getting better atleast? better than my previous drawing of her?

and also, her fur is supposed to be uneven, but then again i still didn't put much time into it
( timer is off, this took maybe 10 minutes? i kept taking breaks )

[saraphena]

i would love to know what you guys think, and i'd also appreciate if you all could give me some tips on how to approve? i mostly need help on the eyes x-x

[~bubble]

I'd say it is looking better and it seems to be that you're finding your own style!
As for improvement, I might suggest doing more 'rough' work - like blocking out your muzzle and ears and even the first part of her body so you know that your neck is in the right place.
Other than that, practice is everything. thirty minutes a day will help you so much, and looking at other people's art you like is a help too (just don't trace their art or try to re-create it without their permission).