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bleh. criticism welcome? by saraphena

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bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby saraphena » Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:37 pm

        a new character of mine, from a comic that should be coming out at some point this year

        i would love some tips and such, and how to do legs again?
        i may color her later.


        also! i am using a touch screen computer to draw this, so i think it's a bit neater than my other drawings ?
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Re: bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby sleepy peach » Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:39 pm

she's really cute! but i'd recommend maybe making her pupils bigger? idk
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Re: bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby saraphena » Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:43 pm

sleepy peach wrote:she's really cute! but i'd recommend maybe making her pupils bigger? idk

        she actually just has small pupils! x3
        she's a breed that is used to living in the glass dimension, so their pupils don't need to dilate to get there eyes used to dimmer light, since night isn't really a thing there, if that makes any sense. ( but when she goes to earth, it's sad because she has no visibility in darker/dimmer places c': )
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Re: bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby XxanimewolfgirluwuxX » Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:45 pm

maybe practice the eyes
shes cute
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Re: bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby .:aishiteru:. » Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:48 pm

As I don't know too much about the breed that she is, I would make some suggestions on the chestfur's overall look in comparison to the rest of the body's fur style. The majority is all scruffy, while the chest appears to be more smoothed over. Consistency means worlds!!

Otherwise, it seems good! Just work on how refined the anatomy is and consistency with the fur, in all places that it is shown!
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Re: bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby saraphena » Sun Jul 22, 2018 3:04 pm

        she is a dragon, so anatomy is kind of hard, especially since i'm not basing her off anything i see, but the reason her fur is messy is because;
        1. i suck at drawing fur. it was still supposed to be slightly uneven, though.
        2. her fur is silkier on the bottom, and is flat and bristle-like on the rest of the majority of her body. kind of picture an odder with rough/messy fur on it's back xD
        3. i suckkkkk at drawing fur.
        4. also forgot to mention, she has muscles >:O ( that show through her fur, apparently xD )
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Re: bleh. criticism welcome?

Postby .:aishiteru:. » Sun Jul 22, 2018 3:17 pm

saraphena wrote:
        she is a dragon, so anatomy is kind of hard, especially since i'm not basing her off anything i see, but the reason her fur is messy is because;
        1. i suck at drawing fur. it was still supposed to be slightly uneven, though.
        2. her fur is silkier on the bottom, and is flat and bristle-like on the rest of the majority of her body. kind of picture an odder with rough/messy fur on it's back xD
        3. i suckkkkk at drawing fur.
        4. also forgot to mention, she has muscles >:O ( that show through her fur, apparently xD )


hahah XD I could try to help you out with drawing fur and such! I love dragon/wolf hybrids, so anytime I'm doing those or drawing cats or whatever, lots of fur is involved. But I get what you mean with the differing fur textures. it will show and look better once more color is added, as well as shading.
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