komohært #185 | oh deer me by veridian

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komohært #185 | oh deer me

Postby veridian » Wed May 23, 2018 9:51 am


hi my name is qpple and its 10:45pm but i have a 4 page geography essay set on monday due tomrorow so i guess i'll post a komo lol
edit:: lol i alread forgot this is my last ga aopt ok love you all
for this komo i would love for you to please tell me what (event) has changed this komo? and was it for the good or for the worse?

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Postby pees » Wed May 23, 2018 9:57 am

    Image
    finna res
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Postby veridian » Wed May 23, 2018 10:01 am

piqeon wrote:
    lol it's been 1000009999 years



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Re: komohært #185 | oh deer me

Postby trans » Wed May 23, 2018 10:06 am

      whoops 2 late to enter now :")
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Re: komohært #185 | oh deer me

Postby kiwipen » Fri May 25, 2018 7:04 am

other info wrote:reygankiwi
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blew all my extras on the
story; 997 words. oh, well.
i hope you enjoy!

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Imagine a life of grey.
Everything around you, grey.
The emotions you feel? Grey.
There is no extreme, no black or white. There is only what is. What's comfortable. What's safe.
It's grey. Colorless. Lackluster.

The woods are filled with natural beauty. Songbirds flitter about, filling the leaves with their calls and chirps and whistles. Wind carries through the trees, tickling their branches as they dance to their own little song.
Underfoot, the soil curls and crunches beneath you. Little insects rock about, getting to where they're going with determination that won't stop them for anything.
The forest, in theory, should be a source of life, color, and happiness for any who walk through.

Abby had lived in the forest her whole life, and she felt nothing of it.
Dirt was dirt. Birds were birds. And wind was just wind. There are only so many shades of green in this world and she'd seen them all, right alongside the billions of shades of brown. It was all the same. Brown was just, well, that. BROWN. It wasn't anything special. And certainly nothing to admire.

Her parents chose to live here a long time ago, settling into a meager life where one lived entirely off the land. There were few pleasures, either; it was eat, sleep, and work. A life of menial tasks, one that was taught as 'the only way' one could live.

One day, Abby was sent to fetch more water for the irrigation trenches. It was a standard trip. It was a small reprieve from her day to day life and she was grateful for it. Upon getting to the river, Abby noticed movement underneath the water. Instantly, she was defensive, keeping her eyes narrowed at the surface of the river. More flickers of movement darted beneath.

Cautiously, Abby approached, and was startled when the movement in the water burst onto the surface, splattering her and drenching her instantly. In front of her stood another komo, with fur that was dark and a silly grin plastered on it's features.

"Howdy!"

The earthly komo blinked, shocked for a few moments, before she realized that they had actually greeted her.

"H...hello..." She said, albeit a bit apprehensively.

"What's the frown for?" They inquired, giving her a prod against her chest. She narrowed her eyes at them, taking a step back.

"I'm not frowning." Abby argued, flicking her ears backward.

"You are now for sure! Who doesn't enjoy a good bit of water on a hot day?"

Abby glanced around, noticing, for the first time, the sunlight filtering through the trees, the warmth pressing against her back, offset by the cool water now dripping from her fur. It was quite warm today, wasn't it? The stuffiness of the forest was normal to her; she hardly noticed the difference.

"Come on! Let's go swimming and escape the heat!" The other komo urged.

"I shouldn't. I have to get water for my farm." Abby argued almost immediately. Though, the sound of going in the water was nice....

"Come on! Just a little swim?" They urged.

After some more hesitation, Abby relented, giving him a nod and padding into the water. It was ice cold to the touch. However, getting used to it happened in seconds, and she had to duck as the dark komo jumped back into the water, splashing her again.

"Doesn't it feel great?!" The komo cheered. Abby felt a small smile play on her lips.

"Yeah, it does feel kind of good." She admitted, paddling around in the water.

Before the two of them could get too comfortable, the current picked up suddenly, and what once was a calm stream turned into a raging river, sending the both of them downriver. Panic welled up in her chest, and Abby began paddling furiously to fight it. However, the Komo next to her was ecstatic with happiness.

"Yes! I love it when this happens!" They cheered.

"Are you crazy? We're going to get swept away!" She panicked. "I got to get to my family!"

"Don't worry about it! We'll get you there in no time!" The komo swam over to her, surprisingly strong against the current. The komo put their paw on her chest. "I promise, it'll be okay."

While the moment would have been touching, Abby's eyes widened in fear as she saw them rapidly approaching a 'cutoff'.

"We're going to fall!" She pushed him away, trying to get to the edge. A rather strong wave pushed her away from safety, and, when she tried to fight, she felt nothing underneath her paws.

She was falling, plummeting towards.....

Abby opened her eyes for a moment, and had a time to see clear water beneath her. She crashed into it, sending water careening out into the air. Underwater, she opened her eyes, looking around at her surroundings. Colorful fish were scattered about, startled by the sudden komo in the water. Shiny pebbles lined the bottom of the lagoon, all different colors. Little shells were here and there; she hadn't ever seen so many.

Abby rose to the surface to get some air, letting out a gasp. Looking around, her ears perked up, and for the first time of her life, life sparkled in her eyes.

The clearing she found herself in was teeming with life; beautiful flowers of dozens of colors were in bloom, filling the air with a sweet scent. The trees were clear here, and she could see the big, beautiful blue sky above her. A breeze was making petals dance through the air.

For once in her life, the world was...colorful. She could finally appreciate the world in all it's beauty, and all it's amazing colors. Birds weren't just birds; they were the songstresses of the forest. There wasn't just dirt; it was the resting ground for the plants that gave life to the world. The trees helped give a crown to the sky.

For the first time in her life, the world wasn't just grey.
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Re: komohært #185 | oh deer me

Postby veridian » Sat May 26, 2018 6:06 am

    BWASHDBSJHAFASBF Hello ! THis is an important message !!

    my dumb, as i mentioned, it was almost midnight when i released this, and i thought i put down june 4th, but,, ,,, as you can see, i put down the 23rd of may?? i made a big mistake adsfnjsdf

    anYWay I want to extend this to the proper date I was supposed to put, June 4th, Midnight BST because!! i was awfully silly ahhh,
    i will also be handing out some RUs as an apology!!

    edit;; thank you, reygankiwi for unknowingly informing me!
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Postby p-plum » Sun May 27, 2018 1:48 pm

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Username -- Morelull
Name -- Sashiko
Gender -- Female


"It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light."
- Aristotle, Greek philosopher


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Soft earth under fleshy tones,
Drifting throughout the woodland
Trees whisper tales of woe
Of an encounter never planned

The wilderness never smelled so sweet
Although I wouldn't have ever known
A piercing wail and an awful shriek
Chilled me down to my bone

His ghastly gaze and fierce growl
Were as untold as they were unknown
As the grip on my leg tightened
I'd never felt so alone

Songbirds morphed into screeching ravens
As the grass turned black and dull
His icy hand was all I knew
The land had turned to null

An innocent animal's skull
Hung as a trophy upon the wall
Could I succumb to this same fate?
Would Aerthin know of my toll?

A hasty snap from my coiled tail
And an uncalled for but endearing smile
Being friends with Mother Nature
Seemed as if it was all worthwhile

A sudden thunderous clap
And an escape from the clutches of death
Had I an encounter with my downfall?
Nothing drew a peep but my breath

As lilliputian feet brushed upon the soil
And my mind was once more at rest
A shimmering beam of light came down
And made itself my guest

A prismatic rainbow lit up the woods
And a tear fell from my eye
Glimmering markings appeared upon me
A sorrowful gift received from the sky

Had it come to say sorry
Or to wish me a forlorn goodbye?
Whoever knew there were such monsters
In the calm summer of mid-July

And as my new skin glistened with colour
And the rainbow left with silence
My memories never left but affected me
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Postby cherubim » Sun May 27, 2018 11:21 pm

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a lazy day's sunset rays land on the checkered-fabric lid of a singular glass jar, sitting on a chipped and dented wooden stool in front of a canvas. a small shadow is behind the canvas, small flecks of paint upon various parts of her furred face, almost looking like a rainbow assortment of freckles. lidded green eyes peer above the canvas every now and again, looking down at the delicate creature perched on a singular daisy stem in the jar. it shouldn't feel too upset; it's a model for today - a gorgeous one at that. fiorella smiles at the pipevine swallowtail, reassuring it that it'll be done soon! and you'll be let out once more, gorgeous.

with a few more strokes of vibrant blue for highlights, fiorella stands back to look at her masterpiece, quite happy with the end product. she has been catching and painting butterflies for years now, always praising them, always looking after them. their lifespans, no matter how short they were, mattered and it was cruel for her to keep them in captivity until they died. the very thought brought tears to her eyes.
nonetheless, she spun around the painting with a quiet 'ta - daa!', green eyes alight with pride. she looked to the jar, hoping that the butterfly could see; a model needs to approve of the end product, after all. a smile, soft coos of appraisal and a kiss to the jar later, fiorella opened the jar, gently lifting the pipevine stem out and leaving it on the stool, watching the butterfly. it wasn't moving.

fiorella picked up the stem, gently shaking it so to encourage the butterfly to move. with a horrified gasp, fiorella watched as the butterfly dropped to the ground, still. she killed it. fiorella was horrified. what had she done wrong? was there not enough air? was the flower not adequate?

she cupped the butterfly in her paws, whispering soft apologies to the insect. it was then that it dawned on her; lives are so short, so fragile, that nothing could have prevented it. and yet, fiorella wanted to do something. if not for the butterfly, for those whose lives could be cut short at any notice.
of course, there's only so much one can do for those lives but support and cherish them - so that's exactly what the komo plans to do.

in the confines of her makeshift hut covered in butterfly paintings, fiorella grips a quill, ink bloched upon her paws and feather dusting the top of her nose every now and again as she scribbled down a heartfelt note. she allows the ink to dry, setting aside the thin paper and moving to get the small painting she had completed earlier that day. once both the letter and painting was stuffed into an envelope, fiorella scribbles a tiny heart on the back of it and places her white-lace scarf around her neck. she then sets off, hoping that her letter will give hope to another in need.

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Re: komohært #185 | oh deer me

Postby lumilys » Wed May 30, 2018 6:20 am

「 OᒪIᐯE 」

ᖴEᗰᗩᒪE ┃ ᑭIᔕᑕEᔕ


OTᕼEᖇᔕ ᔕᗩY I TᖇᑌᔕT TOO ᗰᑌᑕᕼ
I ᔕᗩY "YOᑌ TᖇᑌᔕT TOO ᒪITTᒪE".

TᕼE ᗪᗩY ᑕᗩᗰE ᗯᕼEᖇE I ᗯᗩᔕ
ᑭᖇOᐯEᑎ ᗯᖇOᑎG
ᗷY TᕼE OᑎE ᗯᕼO I ᔕᑌᑭᑭOᔕE
ᑎEᐯEᖇ ᗷEᒪIEᐯEᗪ Iᑎ ᗰE ᗩT ᗩᒪᒪ,

ᗩᑎᗪ ᔕO I ᔕTᗩY
ᔕᑌᖇᖇOᑌᑎᗪEᗪ ᗷY ᗩ ᗯᗩᒪᒪ I'ᐯE EᑎTᖇᑌᔕTEᗪ
ᗯITᕼ ᗰY
ᔕᗩᖴETY,
ᖴEEᒪIᑎGᔕ,
ᗩᑎᗪ ᗰY TIᑎY ᒪIᔕT Oᖴ ᗯᕼO I KᑎOᗯ I ᑕᗩᑎ TᖇᑌᔕT.

ᑎOᗯ, TO ᑭᖇOᐯE TO ᗰE YOᑌᖇ ᗷEᒪIEᖴ Iᑎ ᗰE
YOᑌ ᗰᑌᔕT ᑕᒪIᗰᗷ OᐯEᖇ TᕼᗩT ᗯᗩᒪᒪ ᗯITᕼ
KIᑎᗪᑎEᔕᔕ, ᒪOᐯE,
ᗩᑎᗪ YOᑌᖇ Oᗯᑎ TᖇᑌᔕT Iᑎ ᗰE
ᗩᑎᗪ TᕼEᑎ, OᑎᒪY TᕼEᑎ,
ᗯIᒪᒪ YOᑌ ᗩᑭᑭEᗩᖇ Oᑎ ᗰY TIᑎY ᒪIᔕT.

ᗩᑎᗪ ᔕO I ᔕᗩY
YOᑌ KᑎOᗯ ᔕOᗰEOᑎE ᒪOᐯEᔕ YOᑌ
ᗯᕼEᑎ TᕼEY ᗰᗩᑎᗩGE TO TᗩKE Oᑎ TᕼE
ᗪᗩᑎGEᖇOᑌᔕ TᗩᔕK Oᖴ
ᑕᒪIᗰᗷIᑎG ᑌᑭ YOᑌᖇ Oᗯᑎ ᗯᗩᒪᒪ.

ᗩᑎᗪ ᑎE᙭T TIᗰE,
IᑎᔕTᗩᒪᒪ ᗩ ᗪOOᖇ ᖴOᖇ TᕼEᗰ
ᗩᑎᗪ ᕼOᑭE TᕼᗩT TᕼEY ᗩᖇE ᗩᒪᗯᗩYᔕ
TᕼEᖇE ᖴOᖇ YOᑌ Iᑎ YOᑌᖇ TIᗰEᔕ Oᖴ ᑎEEᗪ.


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Re: komohært #185 | oh deer me

Postby veridian » Thu Jun 07, 2018 9:23 am

    Lmao this ended on Monday, and will be judged shortly.

    Just here to say this competition is closed! : )
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