[lilacpetals<3]

yAY SO IT'S PERIL!!!!!

coloring is a bit messy (cough) but yeeeeaaaa

feel free to criticize me c:

[Marinee]

I think the only other thing that can be worked on is the linework. Maybe instead of the pen tool, use the pencil tool. It's opacity is a lot better.

Other than that and the coloring which you noticed (and yeah, coloring can be hard oof I'm terrible at it if I can't use Lock Alpha) it's great!
Keep drawing!

Also, if this is your second Oekaki, then you're doing really great!

[mthorsewhisperer]

YAY ITS PERIL!!!!! i read the title and was like "is this peril or something that somebody named it that sounds exactly like what Peril said to turtle" BUT THEN YAS ITS PERIL THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY

[lilacpetals<3]

I think the only other thing that can be worked on is the linework. Maybe instead of the pen tool, use the pencil tool. It's opacity is a lot better.

Other than that and the coloring which you noticed (and yeah, coloring can be hard oof I'm terrible at it if I can't use Lock Alpha) it's great!
Keep drawing!

Also, if this is your second Oekaki, then you're doing really great!

Thank you!! I will definitely take these into consideration

[lilacpetals<3]

YAY ITS PERIL!!!!! i read the title and was like "is this peril or something that somebody named it that sounds exactly like what Peril said to turtle" BUT THEN YAS ITS PERIL THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY

yessss