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Asterion wrote:When I was first born.... well, to say the least, no one had high hopes for me. In fact, no one thought I would survive the night.. my mom had trouble giving birth to me, and it was almost bad enough that neither of us made it. So, her owners decided to let me fade quietly into the night...
But I had other plans. Even before I knew myself, somehow, I understood that I had to fight this. I tried as hard as I possibly could, and eventually, I stood. I looked to my mother, but she didn't want me- I guess it makes sense, I was so large, I hurt her a lot when I was born. Still... how's a colt to survive without even a mother. I knew that if nothing happened, I wouldn't make it. So I changed things myself. At that moment, I made my fist, and loudest noise. I neighed, although it sounded more like a howl, and I neighed like my life depended on it. After all, it really did. And thank goodness I did.
Within a few minutes, which felt like an eternity, the people who owned my mother came running, and were delighted to find me alive! But, they were upset about the fact that my mom was rejecting me. Time, though, smiled upon me. Just a week before, a mare had been brought into our stables- one who had recently given birth. The people brought me to her, and she immediately began to lick me, treating me as though I was her own. I suppose it must've looked weird, a palomino mare with a colt that looked like me. But I never complained.
She raised me, and instilled me with a spirit that could never be broken. I truly believe she loved me, and I think she still does, although now we're old enough to be seperated.
I barely survived when I was born, but you wouldn't guess that from how I am now. I am strong, proud, tall, and kind. Although I am free, I still treat the people who saved me with the respect they've earned. I protect those around me, and smile upon the children of all different kinds.
I am Asterion, and I am a stallion who will never be broken.
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