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Crying wolf by DJD⋆Leader

Artist DJD⋆Leader [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 22 minutes
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Crying wolf

Postby DJD⋆Leader » Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:11 am

This is my very first intermediate. I hope it belongs here!

I mainly wanted to post here for some comments and critique, I want my art to be the best that it can be. Please give my some critique! comments are welcome too. Please enjoy!!






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Re: Crying wolf

Postby 3000feet » Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:29 am

Nice :) :clap:
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Re: Crying wolf

Postby ↫mars↬ » Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:43 am

If you want Crits, then I think that the muzzle should be a bit shorter, and try to make sharp jagged lines for some fur, to make it more realistic. Also, try shadeing and useing the smuge and blender tools to make the shadeing tie in with everything elce. I also think that your anatimy is a little off, so I suggest useing this to help you:
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs37/f/2008/ ... istisk.png

and for paws and heads:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs16/f/2007/ ... _Elruu.gif

I hoped this helped! And sorry if i was a bit harsh with the crits ;)
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