this didnt turn out quite as i wanted it and any pointers would be appreciated also. i want to know if this is really intermediate..ive had many many people tell me past posts are but im not very satisfied with this one.....its too bland.
its a dream i had a few years ago..there isnt any sound and you cant feel the wind that whips the colorless grass around. someone urges you to run to saftey ,the bottom of the blue mountains that stick up like ridgid bright knives from the ground. its a strange place with two very bright moons and no stars . the sky is a strange whispy yet solid consistancy and you fell the increadable fear of whats behind you as you run or try to run to safety..no matter how hard you try pounding the ground with tired feet you dont go anywhere and the only certain thing is uncertainty.







