Dargon Lines WIP by BlizzardTheWizard

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Dargon Lines WIP

Postby BlizzardTheWizard » Wed Feb 07, 2018 10:38 am

Tell me if I need to change anything please! <3
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Re: Dargon Lines WIP

Postby Scottish9 » Wed Feb 07, 2018 12:38 pm

Very cute! As you're probably aware, there need to be belly-scale plates for males with their own color and line layers.

Maybe you could make the chest a bit deeper and the stomach curve up a bit? Kind of like a greyhound's but not so dramatic?
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Re: Dargon Lines WIP

Postby BlizzardTheWizard » Wed Feb 07, 2018 12:39 pm

Scottish9 wrote:Very cute! As you're probably aware, there need to be belly-scale plates for males with their own color and line layers.

Maybe you could make the chest a bit deeper and the stomach curve up a bit? Kind of like a greyhound's but not so dramatic?

yeah I know multiple things in this trigger me. I'll fix it when I line it! <3
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Re: Dargon Lines WIP

Postby Scottish9 » Wed Feb 07, 2018 4:49 pm

OK, I love it! Here's a few (very minor) tweaks that I'd like

~Again with the chest/belly. Something like this but less dramatic (the unders look to straight for my taste)

~The nose only has the one horn, and it's closer to the tip of the nose

~Would you be able to erase some lines so that the tail and the wing arms (nor the membrane!) look more connected to the body?

~The line of the back that continues when the neck meets the back doesn't quite look right to me

Sorry if I'm being too picky. I love your lines and I really want this to pull off!
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Re: Dargon Lines WIP

Postby BlizzardTheWizard » Thu Feb 08, 2018 10:55 am

Scottish9 wrote:OK, I love it! Here's a few (very minor) tweaks that I'd like

~Again with the chest/belly. Something like this but less dramatic (the unders look to straight for my taste)

~The nose only has the one horn, and it's closer to the tip of the nose

~Would you be able to erase some lines so that the tail and the wing arms (nor the membrane!) look more connected to the body?

~The line of the back that continues when the neck meets the back doesn't quite look right to me

Sorry if I'm being too picky. I love your lines and I really want this to pull off!


yes, yes! okay! yeah that line there isn't even mean tot be there! xD I'll fix it now!
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Re: Dargon Lines WIP

Postby Scottish9 » Thu Feb 22, 2018 11:25 am

Are you going to do the male-scales or subspecies? These lines are cool!
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