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my first oekai by .:Ash~cloud:.

Artist .:Ash~cloud:. [gallery]
Time spent 20 minutes
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my first oekai

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:40 am

this is my first ever one what do you think please let me know merry christmas everyone hope you get what you want :D
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare
I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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Re: my first oekai

Postby DamesleFly » Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:22 am

I think this belongs in beginner oekai.
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Re: my first oekai

Postby Orbitsy » Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:23 am

Mrs.Gale Hawthorne<3 wrote:
I think this belongs in beginner oekai.


Same >o< I think to start off with, it's best to post in beginner c:
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Re: my first oekai

Postby pisgah » Fri Dec 17, 2010 3:33 pm

I agree. It's amazing for your fist ever Oekaki, but not amazing enough for intermediate- yet. Keep up the good work!
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Re: my first oekai

Postby Not me nope » Sun Dec 19, 2010 9:51 pm

This is amazing Becky!
Keep up the good work! u should keep drawring!
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PREVIOUSLY KNOWN AS BECCA~ASH


All I want is nothing more,
To see you knocking at my door,
'Cause if I could see your face once more,
I would die a happy man I'm sure.

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Re: my first oekai

Postby .:Ash~cloud:. » Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:00 am

thx u guys u r all right
Im in a field because things did not go my way
poem by me!
Why did I get involved? does he still love me? I hope so…
I lay down in the daisies, trying to think of something to do,
gifts wrapped

I see a lady walk past with her dog “ these daisies look nice” she bent down beside me and wiped my tears “cheer up” she whisperd “things will work out” she left clasping some daisies, her dog at her side. I rolled on my belly looking at the daisies, being blown gently into my face, surrounding me like a blanket by the wind I plucked one out from the ground, about to strip it of its identity, without these its just bare
I was just about to when a voice said inside my head : “why ruin a perfect, beautiful flower when I know he loves me not?” I tossed it and watched it fly away
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