[rachiechu888]

Hi there! Here's my redline of your pic. Sorry if you can't read my chicken scratch writing lol o.o

Here's what I said:
- Shorter snout, eyes higher, smaller head
- Ears forward
- Head in front of shoulders
- Neck floof!
- Back and belly curved
- Legs have natural joints (not stiff looking)
- Tail facing downward (and longer)