[blueberriesryummy]

my first entry here!!
I really like the determined and fearless look of Noskas. I tried to make this entry emphasize fearlessness attitude even more :3

weeping tail (common)
hair edits (common)
line edited-ear bite (common)
aura-glowing hair(rare)
elementary properties/abilities-lightning (very rare)
small tail edit ("major fur edit")-(uncommon)

[jennfreckles]

Thank you so much for being the first to try out ^.^
I have some critique if you'd like it

Good things:
~immense creativity and insanely unique designs!
~good color choice, blues and whites/blacks are always great choices!
~I can tell you're showing off your line editing skills <3

Things that could improve/suggestions:
~The design and coloring seemed a bit sloppy and colored out of the lines and such, i understand that drawing is quite hard to master but maybe slowing down and taking an attention to this will make you a much better artist and make everything you do a lot more pleasing to the eye
~The Noska species in general has tails more brightly colored then not, in this design it's the same as the rest of the body and even though this isn't entirely wrong, i'd like artists to have at least this knowledge of the species.
~I'd like to see a list of edits/a rarity to the designs you make so i know you understand that part adoptable artistry

With all this said i'd like to see a couple more designs <3

[blueberriesryummy]

thank you so much for the critique!

I unfortunately read that Noska's have bright fur colors after I was 75% done with my first entry so.. i decided to keep going
(also i put in a rarity sheet :3 so i hope i got it all (?))
~new entry coming soon (with bright fur XD)