[dxrmon]

the snout was angled weirdly, which changed the piece entirely.
the eye also made the piece weird, as it was placed on the forehead. if you make a circle and make an ' x ' in it, it really helps.
make sure the fur has some sort of texture to it, not just some spikes.

i really loved redlining it, i love your style and dont let these redlines make you change as an artist. you are an amazing artist and dont let redlines change your style, if you like your style, then you like it.!