Redline by Charizard !

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Redline

Postby Charizard ! » Thu Nov 16, 2017 8:24 am

Ahh ok so!! I couldn't write everything down so I just put symbols

♡- The Mouth should go down, then up. The muzzle looks like it's just kind of melting?? Idk
If you were going for a snarl type thing then I suggest making the mouth closed, then near the end have it opened a little showing teeth closing it off

♥- I feel as though the fur should have more to it and should go up more. Personally, I always make it pointing down, but if you want it pointing up maybe add more fur other than the two you had, and give it more curvy shapes.

★- The eye is too far up the head. You're probably going for a more realistic-looking eye, so don't mind the shape. Just put it near the end of the the mouth, or put it a bit down the head.

☆- Give the ear more shape and some fur. Tbh that's all I have to say there.

Please take everything I say with a brain of salt I'm bad at this ahahaaaaaa
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Re: Redline

Postby Nero The Corgi King » Fri Nov 17, 2017 4:07 am

Thank you so much for helping me ^^
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