[.clarity]

...that turned out badly =/

[Leollio]

I think it looks very nice! I like the colours you used and the words you've written. The circles aren't a single colour, either, which makes it look very pretty, and the placement of the circles also works well. Your writing is also very beautiful, I like it very much. Perhaps add on a bit to this idea? I like it.

[.clarity]

Thank you so much! I think I will take on your advice...

[Leollio]

Ah, I love it! The little circles give it so much more flair and detail! I love the minuscule white circles all around, too. They add on texture. It's definitely improved, and although I am no art critic, I like it very much! Great job, I checked out some of your other artwork, too, and I like it all.

[.clarity]

Aww thank you!