[lex]

i rlly frickin like this batch

Owner: X
Name: X
Gender: X
Gender for breeding purposes: DXAB
Post: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=3595897

Hatch Day: 04/10/2017
Mature Day: 04/17/2017

Parent 1

Parent 2

Amadeus

Aethos

Parent 1 | Parent 2

Grandmother | Grandfather
Great-Grandmother | Great-Grandfather | Great-Grandmother | Great-Grandfather
Great-Great-Grandmother | Great-Great-Grandfather

None

[padaleckii]

SO COOL. I WANT TO STEAL.

[Mint Chip]

Have to admit although the colors of this egg palette wasn't my thing, the outcome of the batch is pretty great. I like that you did get in some elements of the parent but not too much - this is key after all. And the fact you took the time for that dynasty listing it all out, that's pretty impressive as well. Also the fact that you stuck very closely to the egg's palette is pretty impressive. For a palette like this one I likely would have add a black (off-black, I don't advise using pitch black for anything) or a white to offset those colors but seriously this is a pretty solid entry. The only criticism is that the design should reflect one parent and not really both. Unlike a normal nursery batch, hatchery batches can only really pull from one parent; while occasionally the designs can look unintentionally like both parents, it is something to be more cautious of in the future. But other than that, and again a little more attention to smoothing out some of the design/pattern's lines, I don't have any other real critiques. I look forward to seeing your next entries. c: