[lex]

Egg | Juvenile

So I've completed my first entry!! Was actually really excited this one rolled a major mane, cause I want to get better at edits <3 Hope you like it! Was rather fun~

Artist notes: Mane stripes are white on 29% add/luminescence + stars are white on 50% add/luminescence

Owner: X
Name: X
Gender: X
Gender for breeding purposes: DXAB
Post: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=3595897

Lay Day: 01/10/2017
Hatch Day: 04/10/2017
Mature Day: 11/10/2017

Mother

Father

Ginger

Quill

Mother | Father

Chanced (Major Mane) - YES - Rare

[Vixen Luo]

B L ESS
SO GOOD

[padaleckii]

I, as an adopter, would be more than 100% satisfied if this were my batch. You blended the parents markings and colors both really well, and there is still a uniqueness to the design. The mane edit is beautifully done. <3
This batch overall is amazing, I am rooting for you, lex!

[lex]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa <333 thank both of you ^^ i'm so glad you like this viscet!!

[Mint Chip]

I feel like for this batch you really mixed them well. I didn't picture this myself when I saw the pair but that's not a bad thing at all. Seeing a different mix than I or someone else might have seen means more added variety to the team. So that is an asset. I like that you can tell who both parents are but also if you saw the viscet by itself then you wouldn't necessarily think of either viscet when looking at it if you didn't know the parents. If I had any real criticism for this viscet is that some of the designs markings could use a little smoothing or another pen stroke; but that's really minor as majority of the design is very fluid and smooth. Just small spots like the hip markings could use a little smoothing. Also your linework for the edit looks really good, but there are a few spots that could use a just a tad bit of smoothing but again those are really minor parts too. But really that's the only thing I can really pick out about this that can be in anyway needing work. Overall this was a very good entry. I hope to see more because the singular nursery batch doesn't give me a full gauge on what you can do as far as mixing, but this is a great start. c: