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I tried by Kenobi.

Artist Kenobi. [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 6 minutes
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I tried

Postby Kenobi. » Tue Sep 12, 2017 3:59 pm

I tried.
Please excuse the weird looking feet, I'm well aware that I don't know how to draw them.
Also, ignore the ugly background. As you can see I didn't put much effort into it.
I appreciate any comments.
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Re: I tried

Postby fishstix. » Tue Sep 12, 2017 4:00 pm

it does look like you put alot of effort into it ^^;
the background looks nice, i like the clouds
and the feet look just fine :)
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Re: I tried

Postby Shortstripe12 » Tue Sep 12, 2017 4:02 pm

I think it looks beautiful! try to work on the backgrounds a bit and the anatomy (the feet are fine, the face shape and hands need a bit of work) try to shade the face so that it has depth. pick a light source for your shading. add light in the hair. add blemishes and other inconsistencies so you can differentiate your characters.

Overall great work! I think it looks so good!
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Re: I tried

Postby Kenobi. » Wed Sep 13, 2017 4:56 am

Stone~ wrote:it does look like you put alot of effort into it ^^;
the background looks nice, i like the clouds
and the feet look just fine :)


Really? Thank you!


Shortstripe12 wrote:I think it looks beautiful! try to work on the backgrounds a bit and the anatomy (the feet are fine, the face shape and hands need a bit of work) try to shade the face so that it has depth. pick a light source for your shading. add light in the hair. add blemishes and other inconsistencies so you can differentiate your characters.

Overall great work! I think it looks so good!


Eh, I like the face shape like that since I can't draw straight enough lines for a more realistic face,
and I gave up on hands a long time ago :lol:
I've been trying to do shading but since I haven't learned how I just kinda... put dark parts in random places.... I'm working on it.
I don't have any books to use that show me how to shade, and I can't watch youtube so I don't know how to go about learning.
Thank you! I will try to work on the shading... and hair... and hands...
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