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entry #1

Postby fall out boy, » Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:35 am

coat color; blue roan tobiano
genetics; EE/aa/Rr/nT

beads; tourmaline
rank; scout
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constructive criticism please? I'd love to know how I can improve my art.
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Re: entry #1

Postby Medd-Lee » Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:44 am

With as severe as this roan is, it should go much farther up her neck. Her legs should also be dark points. Otherwise, beautiful!

She's also silver, so silver blue roan tobiano is correct.
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Re: entry #1

Postby fall out boy, » Thu Jul 27, 2017 9:00 am

Meddled. wrote:With as severe as this roan is, it should go much farther up her neck. Her legs should also be dark points. Otherwise, beautiful!

She's also silver, so silver blue roan tobiano is correct.

alrighty, thanks! I'll start working on that really quickly.
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