entry 2 - plz help me by colambo

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entry 2 - plz help me

Postby colambo » Wed Jul 19, 2017 8:44 am

edits
st tooth
st shine
cm tail (its styled fur.. like a braided thing w a paintbrush-like tip n hair-sprayed 100 times)
cm hair
cm backmane (its just these fur pads idk its inspired by an offical kal that i saw w the same thing. it happens)
uc ear
uc tongue
uc shorter fur

I KNOW THIS IS A MESS... BUT
can someone please critique this for me? i might use it as my myo
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Re: entry 2 - plz help me

Postby min genius » Wed Jul 19, 2017 9:16 am

I think the only thing I have to add (since I'm not a good digital artist) is that there are a few places that aren't colored in. Other than that, it looks good to me! c:
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Re: entry 2 - plz help me

Postby arcticlights » Wed Jul 19, 2017 5:04 pm

    Like the colors you used on this entry.
    Some small critique I might add would be to smooth out your linework.
    Add some shine to the hair (maybe make it a tad more lighter than the rest of the body color).
    Try your best to keep inside the lines, and color in all the empty spaces so that it won't look too messy.
    Overall, I really like the concept of the design! It looks very nice, keep up the good work! <3
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Re: entry 2 - plz help me

Postby colambo » Thu Jul 20, 2017 2:58 am

Min Genius wrote:I think the only thing I have to add (since I'm not a good digital artist) is that there are a few places that aren't colored in. Other than that, it looks good to me! c:

aw thank u ;v;
arcticlights wrote:
    Like the colors you used on this entry.
    Some small critique I might add would be to smooth out your linework.
    Add some shine to the hair (maybe make it a tad more lighter than the rest of the body color).
    Try your best to keep inside the lines, and color in all the empty spaces so that it won't look too messy.
    Overall, I really like the concept of the design! It looks very nice, keep up the good work! <3


ok thank u so much!! i'll try to line it smoother. the hair definitely needs to be lightened.. so dark its hard to see
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