[Careless-soul]

This is my first, so please comment and tell me if this is good, bad, and tell me on how to improve please:)

[kasoogi]

Wow thats really good! espacially for this being you first oekaki!Really good!Im not very good at telling people on what they need to improve, so its great!

[Careless-soul]

thank-you:) i edited it a little bit, background and stuff, a little foggy if you'd say, hehe. I hope you like the newly updated version:)

[livourock]

wow thats really good for your first okayke (mine was afful)

[kasoogi]

Yah, the background is great! it makes the rose stand out more!All of my drawings on here are just stuff i did when i was bored, and did them within about 2 minutes, unless i was testing other stuff XD.

[Careless-soul]

thank you all!

[alli911]

i do like it, it could use a touch of bright color or interest,like pink flower, or blue sky, or green leaves-alli911

[Careless-soul]

there are green leaves..

[Careless-soul]

oh ya, and its supposed to be dull like that:P its not supposed to be bright