[little fishball]

Im wanting to make an adoptable, so I need some help

Winners:
1st place: The woods
2nd place: ~* Bumbling *~
3rd place: Alihorse


rules:
You can fix my anatomy but not the whole design
you have to add me once you're finished

Tips:
I FREAKING LOVE EXCESS FLUFF PLEASE ADD SOME
Chibi and cartoon are gr8

A list of the things it needs:
Black thicker lining
Facial details
lock alpha friendly colouring
a name

prize: OK YOU GUYS ARE SO AMAZING I NEED TO DO THIS, I changed the prizes around so they're a bit better
1st: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=1610058 or http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=165606313
2nd: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=12446717
3RD: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=224160704

if you do not want a prize and want to give it to someone else please inform me
off ye go

edit: I nearly forgot, end day is june 3rd
I cant take it, the end day is now the 22nd of may

[little fishball]

BUMP

[little fishball]

bump

[little fishball]

bump

[little fishball]

bump

[RiN_X04]

Mark

[little fishball]

Bump

[little fishball]

bu,mp

[breakerbeam]

mark !! (i need money,,)

[breakerbeam]

also is the tail?? a mouth???