i see you gave help to me, so why not give help to you too? :>
This is pretty good in my opinion, but I think you need to work on the colors. (I mean coloring in the lines, and checking over to see if any color was outside the lines that wasn't meant to be ^-^) Always check to see if any line is overlapping too! :>
I hope I didn't offend you, I think you have great talent when it comes to art!