[Jealousy Empress]

ashkit is moonflowers only kit and the first child of bloodwolf. he is deformed due to him being a child of a supposed "phantom pregnancy" and he has speech problems, a crooked jawline, one really bloodshot eye, one deformed paw, and folded, deaf ears. his tail is docked. a lot of the cats born around his age don't like him, because the instant he was born, goldenpaw knew who the father was - his exiled brother. moonflower, at his birth, said, "he looks like his father." when asked who the father was, she replied, "a loner called crowheart." goldenpaw recognises this as bloodwolf's pre-exile name, and tells threeleg.

[eltonn]

im sorry to be a critic.. but folded ears are from the scottish fold bloodline, and neither of his parents were scottish folds. bloodshot eyes mean the schlera has red lines, not the iris. for a tail to be docked, it would have to be cut by a twoleg, or born a manx. again, neither of his parents are manx cats. also, i dont see why other kits wouldnt like him; none of the kits know who bloodwolf is.

[Jealousy Empress]

I usd the folded ears lines and the dock tailed lines simply because i'm kinda lazy and it was the middle of the night. ashkit was deformed - enough for his tail to be short and stumpy, and his ears to be wrongly shaped. there wasn't enough schlera on the lines for me to do bloodshot eyes properly, so I just coloured the one eye red. the other kits would yes, know about bloodwolf. even if only silverkit and bramblekit, and to an extent, maybe starling- they'd have heard the kit's tales from moonflower (or in starling and silverkit's cases, seen him.). those kits tales told would maybe like those to scare kits from being bad - like in book 1 series 2 of canon warriors - "the kits had been told tales of tigerstar to stop them from wandering off."
overall, if the kits early on associated ashkit with bloodwolf, it's understandable he'd be teased.

[eltonn]

alright, thank you for explaining :3