[ShadyBro]

Anyone interested in helping me out? Just need a good redline for this lil american pitbull terrier thingy <3
Mainly looking for something to give a good paw example as well as straighten out that awful face (must show both eyes fully tho)
Will be dishing out some DA points or C$ (whichever you prefer) for whoever helps me out with this properly.

Please dont try unless you can actually fix what I need fixed, and dont use this sketch for anything! Thanks <3

[*JACKAL*]

Actually this doesn't need a red line, but I can try and work on the paws. What's wrong with the head?

[ShadyBro]

Actually this doesn't need a red line, but I can try and work on the paws. What's wrong with the head?

Its not terrible but it needs some adjustments. Just slight things that are off but ultimately makes the whole image off balance.

[GoatMomBestMom]

in my opinion the heads fine but i guess i can change it and the paws see if you like it but using a mouse is hard